would love review - site in progress

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Joined: Mar 1999

HI, I'm almost done with this project (1 of 3)and I'd love to get some feedback
http://asymmetric.hypermart.net/sitedesign.html

I'm still working on the content and "hover buttons" but would love some opinions on the layout, flow etc.....
I can't look at it objectively anymore since I've been looking at it too long Smiling

thank you,

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Carolyn Jones
icq# 5351437

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- jagged buttons
- no home page link
- need more content on most pages
- where it says 'Kindest Regards, Carolyn Jones', scan a picture of your signature and put it here.
- lack of colour
+ nice feel and clean design
+ fast loading
- need something in the top right corner.
JP

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http://www.what-next.com

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Joined: Jun 1999

Jagged button edges need fixing.
The sidebar messes up at 1024x768.

I personally can't stand pink marble, but you can't make a site that everyone will like. It's very consistent, which is good.

Fast loading.

Need more text on your pages - they seem very bare.

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i think it's a very nice and professional site, yet simple. the thing about prices, something like reduced rates for non-profit good causes. that really messed me up, maybe for good non-profit causes, or better yet reduced rates for non-profits. anyways, it's a nice site.

good luck

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thank you for your helpful comments Smiling
You're right the buttons look terrible, I assure you they're temporary--working on hover and haven't fixed the files yet.

planning on getting real signiture next time Im near dads scanner Smiling.
Upper corner may have links to my other sites --either there or bottom right, not sure quite yet.

I must have forgotten to fix the width as well when I hastily re-did the left frame -- thank you for pointing that out, I will fix that right away Smiling.

Fairhousing, the reason I worded it that was is that I believe that there are many non-profit Non-good causes. negative social groups, white supremacists etc....... Just wanted to word it right but again, the wording is still fairly rough in form and I need to fix/add to a lot of the content.

as far as the colors and pink marble background, I know that some people wont like that -- just like I don't care for some of the common color combinations others use. I guess the million dollar question is: Will the colors I use sway people from taking me seriously as a web designer (provided all the little kinks are working properly Smiling, if the consensus is YES, I can change those colors -- but would rather not because I like them, I am also working on 2 complete other looks (other sites of mine) that will be more colorful to demonstrate that I can make BRIGHT colorful web sites Smiling.

would love more comments on that,

take care,

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Carolyn Jones
icq# 5351437

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