WolfGirl`s Cave -

They have: 5,633 posts

Joined: Jan 1970

Critique - good or bad is always welcome

They have: 2,390 posts

Joined: Nov 1998

Well there are some good touches to this site, certainly makes a change to what I normally see anyway!
- Your logo background is not flush with the page background, redo the logo on a plain brown canvas and save as a gif with brown transparent this will make a better transition.
- The birds/moon effect is good but they have also been drawn on a light backgrouns and need editing.
- Do you really need two non content intro pages?
JP

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Your website has a good color scheme but i tihnk you over did it with the wolves on the side and the three at the top, maybe make one big logo at the top instead of the 3 wolves heads, and on my 800 by 6000 moniter there is about 400 pixels of sideway scrolling, I think you should get rid of that. and you should fix the javascript error on the front page. I also think you only need on intro page. Its a good website so far.
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Ken Prescott

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