What do you think about my site?
This is the second website I make and it's for this guy named Gibson Dorcé that sings opera. Let me know what you think of it. I have it in hypermart just as a test site so please don't mind the pop-ups, I dind't put them there, hypermart did and they won't be there when I register. It's at http://marinedog.hypermart.net
Megan posted this at 00:27 — 9th July 2001.
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Just quickly - I definitely think you should do something with the menu. Because of the topic for your site I think it would be more appropriate to do a graphic menu instead of the dHTML thing you're using there. Use the same font as the header graphic - that would look nice. Otherwise the site looks pretty good!
Just so you know - that menu DOES work in NS6 - a lot of those dHTML scripts don't.
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Grandmaster posted this at 01:12 — 9th July 2001.
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Isnt to bad so far, a nice color scheme you have there, and thats a great start.
Maybe use the blue bar on the left and put your navigation in there, that would be better for a site such as this, I have a feeling that most of the people using this site wont have the best dhtml viewable browsers.
On the resume page, maybe use a table instead of having everything seperated by ".............". That would make it more professional.
On the sound clips page, try using a better table color then green. On a Grey Green White site, it doesnt blend.
On the Photo's page, the buttons of Professional, Personal, are a little big, and with the red text, it makes them tlook even worse.
The photo's themself, I think would look good with a black line or such around them, but thats just me.
Good job so far though.
Ken Prescott
Webkid16 posted this at 02:34 — 9th July 2001.
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Thank you for your replies. I'll try to fix that a.s.a.p. But the mp3 files don't want to download for some reason. I set it so that visitors can view and have access to it but it still won't work.
mairving posted this at 02:59 — 9th July 2001.
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It looks a little bit barren with the menu hidden as it is. Here are some things that need work:
I know that this may be a rough draft but things like "There photos of his family also" and "glimpse in the photo gallery" are not proper English.
Overall impression was pretty good. It had a generally clean look to it. I am not so sure if the pop-out menu is such a good fit for this site. Those types of menus are generally more effective on a content heavy site, where eyeball space is mostly filled.
Mark Irving
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TheGizmoid posted this at 04:38 — 9th July 2001.
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Yeah, my first impression of seeing him in a short-sleeved shirt and tie was "software developer" or such. LOL! He's a nice looking man and would be better presented in a tux or a suit or such, more befitting to an opera singer.
The table edges don't line up for me in either NS 4.6 or IE 4.0 (Mac).
Add some more keywords to your title. In NS it's just his name, but you could add "opera singer" or such. In IE it has his name and "January 23, 2106". What's up with that?
The sliding DHTML menu is, IMO, rather irritating, and you'd be better served with a table with a more straightforward nav menu.
Centered text looks less professional and is harder to read than flush left. And please don't make it all bold.
You state he's sung throughout the "tri-county area" but I have no idea where that is.
More grammar: "He is avalaible to sing upon request should his schedule dictates."
There's about a 4" gap of white space on the main page before the copyright stuff.
On the bio page, pad the main cell so the text doesn't bump up against the edges. Also, make your page titles distinctive so that if one uses their "go" menu, they can differentiate between the pages and they don't all have the same title.
Include a horizontal row of text links at the bottom of each page.
On the sound clips page, let people know the size of the MP3s they'd be downloading, so peeps on a dialup know what to expect. We're not all on broadband, ya know?
Sadly, I got 403s trying to download any clips, just when my appetite had been whetted and I was really looking forward to hearing what this guy sounds like. I love classical and was willing to wait however long it took an MP3 to download because I was that curious.
The Webmistress posted this at 09:01 — 9th July 2001.
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I get an error :
Line: 129
Char: 1
Error: Object doesn't support this action
I would use a static navigation, the site just doesn't really warrent this type.
Don't centre text & only use bold text to emphasize certain words or headings.
Get rid of blank space on first page.
On the photos, tell us something about them, at the moment we have to guess who the family ones are.
Stick to the same font throughout the site otherwise it looks disjointed.
Julia - if life was meant to be easy Michael Angelo would have painted the floor....
Jiffy posted this at 13:02 — 11th July 2001.
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You need a better pic of him on the main page. Ideally, you would put a picture of him peforming there.
When I went to look at one of the pictures there was no links at all. I had to use the back button on the browser.
The vid clips worked for me.
Webkid16 posted this at 18:09 — 16th July 2001.
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How can I fix the tables so that it lines up when you view it in Netscape? I had this same problem in my last site and couldn't figure it out.
zimbabwe posted this at 00:44 — 18th July 2001.
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I agree with the rest that you should go to a static navigation instead of a DHTML. It doesn't really work with it.
As for the table problems, what version of Netscape are you using and what page are you having the problems? I looked at it in Netscape 4.7, and didn't really see anything wrong.
I also viewed it in IE 6.0 and recieved a runtime error on line 122.
Other than that I think that the site looks good. I like the fancy text that you used for the headers.
Zimbabwe
Webkid16 posted this at 01:38 — 18th July 2001.
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What do you guys mean by static navigation? I kinda know what you mean but I'm not 100% sure.
The Webmistress posted this at 07:37 — 18th July 2001.
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Basically don't use dhtml. Use static text/graphics or rollovers, that show constantly.
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