Turnkey Masterpiece Package

Well you said unreserve so....

It's just look like one big giant ad to me, which could steer away some customer. The scroll length is too long. I would advise adding the most valuable links up top, creating new pages to organize it better and steer away from the ad look. hope that helps.

Tia

Ok here goes .. I will try to be gentle without being patronizing ...

The Yellow on blue in the Logo section is hard to read ...

I must agree about the scroll length ... a more creative approach to organizing it will go a long way ... for example: you could use enticements to get your traffic to click a link that will open new windows. By using different windows the graphics become less obnoxious, and eclectic looking.

I found very little in the design to prompt me to read it ... the first turn off was "infopreneur" ... what the hey is that?

Too many Caps being used ... Judicious font tricks can be far more effective than over use of Caps ...

Also I would recommend a soft "bleed color" for your inside background so you don't have the obnoxious White float over your main background image ...

There is a lot to recommend for your site that is good ... plenty of good information is available if you can hold on long enough to read it ...

Good luck ...

don't take this as major offence but...
I have seen a lot of crap (am I allowed to use that word) on the 'net and it all looks like that. If you chose your site to look more honest, then I think people would take more time to look at it

Hi heebiejeebieclu

Thanks for your crap comments and you are a web designer even can't afford to have a proper webhost.

I have take a look at your website and is really short and sharp.I don't think you convince me to engage your service as your copywriting sucks!

I really need someone who can give me professional advise.

Regards
Lo

Dear Lo,

I am very disheartened to hear someone who is offering well meaning and honest advice being belittled for their efforts!

It does not matter what webhost they are on!
It doesn't even matter if they've made a site before!
They are offering you their oppinion on your website which is what you asked them to do.

Honestly, I visited your site and was convinced that this was a scam artist's attempt at a website. One large page of ad does not a website make!
Granted it might look good in print, but on the internet it fails miserably.

I may not qualify as enough of an expert for you to consider my oppinions worth noting. I've only been selling my webdesign services for 5 years now. I certainly hope you are able to climb down off that high horse of yours and really listen to what others are telling you though. If you really want to sell your services on the internet, you need to know how to pitch to this type of market.
... and basic politeness never hurt.

Lo you asked for honest opinions you got it from heebiejeebieclu and to be honest I agree!

I detest these one page sites that bang on and on about how good the product is with testimonial after testimonial. I hav enver, and will never, buy from one of these types of sites for some major reasons:

99% of these sites are scams
The products are often worthless
They are simply out to make money fro the seller and no-one else.

"Get rich quick", "I made a million in 10 minutes and so can you". Your site reminds me of all those false hopes and you really need to look long and hard at the image you are trying to project and say does it scream scam? Beacuse at the moment it does...

Well he did say "Need your unreserve(sic) and honest comments"

Hi

Thanks for those valuable comments.It seems that most of the comments that I received so far are based on the perspective of a web designer but not as a real Internet Marketer.

What's the point of having a very nice looking webpage with all the flash and graphic but no sales!

You mention that my package is a get rich quick scheme! Am I asking you to invest $10 and get back $10,000 by tomorrow?

With a measly $49.95 and you get so many master resell rights products plus a 12 months free hosting,you called it a scam!

You meant those people who provide me the testimomial are scammer too!

Look at their names,they are reputated Internet Marketers not like those who learn a few tricks and just put up a webpage to call themself web designers but not even make a dime so far!

I am very disappointed with this forum who are very self centre.

Regards
Lo

Turnkey,

I can tell you I've seen lots of sites like yours and I don't even let it finish loading. Not to say there isn't some good information there but as a user I don't like sites that look like yours...it is totally unorganized and looses my interest right away. I suggest that design is also a part of marketing and if you put people off with the design of your site...you don't get a chance to market your product.

I seriously think you need to re-think your website. Not the content but how it is presented. Presentation is a big part of the sale.

Too bad, you wanted comments and then fail to pay attention. It seems there is a concensus of opinions here.

Take it or leave it...but I agree with the others.

Dalmuti

Hi

At least you are talking some sense but I think your expectation is quite high.

I seriously think you need to re-think your website. Not the content but how it is presented. Presentation is a big part of the sale.

Can you please enlighten me what you think is a good presentation site?

Can you give me an example by providing a site URL?

Regards
Lo

Quote: Thanks for those valuable comments.It seems that most of the comments that I received so far are based on the perspective of a web designer but not as a real Internet Marketer.

We are giving you our honest assesments of what we (as consumers and potential clients) think of your site.
As one of the "webdesigners" who looked at your site, I can assure you that not only do I have to know how to sell my services to potential clients, I also have to help them design a website that will sell their product as well.
YES webdesigners ARE internet marketers!

You may notice that we never said that you ARE a scam artist. We said your site made you appear to be one. It doesn't give a professional appearance. It has the flavor of a paid ad on cable tv.

If you want to see some decent website marketing sites... here's a couple...
http://www.clickz.com/
http://www.webadvantage.net/
http://www.marketingsource.com/
Here's a place who specializes in creating websites for marketers.
http://www.webuildpages.com/

If you do not want any more comments about your website, I would be happy to comment on other sites instead.