Thanks4Help! Please Review Improved Site!!

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Hello,

I have read some of your comments in the past about my site at the following URL: http://www.shoppingfishtnet.com I thank you for your help. I just wanted you to see the improvement, and aside from some minor grammatical errors I have just noticed (God only knows why, even with spell check) I am way happier with it than I used to be!

Finally...after about 300 hours worth of work most likely...and...changing the layout like...10 times...I found one that I am satisfied with. I want this site to be in a newsletter like style, which I hope it is.

Thank you for your help. What do you think now??Wink

Julie (fishtail1776)

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Here is the previous thread for reference: http://www.webmaster-forums.net/showthread.php?t=34442

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Julie.

I don't know if anyone else has noticed, or just failed to mention. But you have a problem with your text butting against the google adds, at the left on your page.

I checked this in IE-6, FireFox, and Opera just to be sure it was not just a single browser problem, it isn't.

This should be pretty simple to fix with a little text margining left. Smiling

#PS. Also there is a lot of white space at the top. ???

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I think it will be better when you have more content on there, is it using frames?

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Descriptive page titles should be used. But you already knew that.

The blue text on the blue background just isn't working at all. And while you're fixing that, I know a lot of people that will get a bit ticked off that there's underlined text that isn't a title or a link. Especially with it being blue, that needs to be taken care of.

Off the top-right corner of that blue box there's an empty square. Why? It's also under "This Section Will Soon Contain Featured Product Reviews."

Overall pretty good though.

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For me there is not enough content and too many adds, when people visit your site I think they might decise to go elsewhere.
There seems to be a lot of white space as well, are you adding more content, or is this intentional.

It has some sound advice and the content/information is really good, if there was a little bit more it would be great

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Make a page title, get a better logo, and center the text in the middle. Thats all I can point out since Im not that good myself! ^^

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It is pretty good - but you have to have a real title (like Rodev said). I also could not read the links at the bottom left, blue on blue is tough. The only other thign I would say is that the article font should match the other fonts in the site. Keep going!

It works on my machine.

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Over all it looks clean and easy to navitage. I agree with the others, the logo nees work, but I'm sure you knew that too.

On the home page at the bottom, you need a spacer between the goodle ads on the left and the text on the right.

I think the site will function better when there is more content. For now the look is good.

RussPete

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Logo needs work as mostly everyone mentioned. Too many advertisements at the index page. Content isnt neat..

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