Study Guide site - Death Of A Salesman

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I am building a study guide for Arthur Miller's play "Death of A Salesman". I am building it to submit it to a competition for held by a college in Ireland (for young webmasters - under 18).
Anyway I have the draft for the index page done and want to know what are everone's opinions before I continue with the rest of the site.
http://www.trickynet.co.uk/doas

I would appreciate some feedback.

By the way the logo is not finished. I will be adding the name of the site on the suitcase image. The site is probable going to be called "The Woods Are Burning", a quote from the play but I have not completely decided on that yet.

http://www.trickynet.co.uk/doas

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Thats pretty sweet looking, i like that.
The graphics are nice, and it loads pretty fast.
Good site, I dont have really any dislikes.
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Nice site. I like the icons and rollovers. I would maybe suggest adding curved edges to the top and bottom, but that's just a personal preference. Just noticed something else- the background of the icons does not match the background of the page. Try making the blue background on the icons transparent, so it will blend in perfectly. Overall, though, good use of color and theme.

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Thanks for the comments guys.
I have made the icon images transparent and will see how it will look with curves instead of sharp lines.

Cheers.

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Looks clean to me.
Nice site.

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I really like the site, it looks good!! I also agree you might want to add some curves to the top and bottom!

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I agree with everyone else. It's really nice and clean. Loaded quickly. And I really like the colors. Keep it up so we can see the site as it progresses!

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OMG- I just read that play because in school we had to read it. How ironic, eh? Anyway, I like it.

1) I like the colors a lot.

2) I hate that font. I would recommend Verdana (my fav.) or Arial or something like that.

3) I would pre-load the images because it takes a few seconds for them to flip.

4) I don't really like the things you have around the text. I would not make them overlap like that.

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