Student Critique Request - Homepage Innovations

They have: 4 posts

Joined: Apr 2008

Hello all,

I've created a template for a web design class I'm taking. The site was designed to sell web page design contracts. It's basic but none the less your critique on overall appearance would be much appreciated.

Website URL: http://me4me.ca/homepage_innovations/homepage.php

Justin

P.S If my reviews of other sites are not detailed enough please let me know. Smiling

They have: 4 posts

Joined: Mar 2008

Hi there,

It looks nice and clean. Here are my suggestion which might help you to do better:

1)Could you please put the "Welcome" in the center of the line and change its color?The same issue may exist for the "Product".

2)Could you tell customers which kinds of payment they can choose from?
3)If you have a long list of product, how can you let customer navigate?

SZY

They have: 9 posts

Joined: Apr 2008

its not obvious that "Buy" and "Details" are buttons, until you hover over them. try to make them more conspicuous, by giving them a raised-3D type look with shading and colour. the idea of including "images" of a site instead of the thumbnail taking you to an "actual" site is odd, as linking to a real site would give customers a free "testimonial" that the hypothetical company actually had real customers. the border surrounding the page would look better if both inside and outside were not plain white.

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They have: 1 posts

Joined: May 2008

I Think the website is pretty good. Its nice and clean, and straight forward. Besides what everyone else had already said there is not much more to add. I would tell you to change the basic and business icons, to something a little more flashier. Use something that really sticks out and will catch someone's eye.

He has: 131 posts

Joined: Jun 2008

I can't see the page now. Did you move the site or is the server down? I'll try again later...

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They have: 15 posts

Joined: Aug 2008

I tried to visit you site but its down.

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