Stay True Clothing - StayTrueClothing.com

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Joined: May 2004

Hey everybody, I am a small web designer who also has decided to leap into the world of clothing. I like my site as of now but because I am in the middle of switching hosts I have to use some direct links (staytrueclothing.com/contact instead of just /contact)
I would love to hear what you would have to say...

The site is: Http://www.StayTrueClothing.com

They have: 36 posts

Joined: Nov 2003

Center that page, it will look 300 times better.
Also the kewords at the bottom "Stay True Clothing, Fashion, Rabbbird, Rick James *****, Ron Herman, Obey Giant,Emo Clothes, Punk Clothes, Hardcore Clothes, Scenester Fashion, Hipster, Indie clothes, Indie Rock, Free City, Vintage." sorta look bad, they hang over the border, and search engines know that trick. Try writing a paragraph or two with those keywords in them. You will get much better results

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They have: 13 posts

Joined: May 2004

Thanks, AIFamdotcom

I will get on that,

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Trevor,

I was looking at this site when you posted your other one for review. This looks nice and all, but rather like a template (read: boring). Having seen what you've done with your other site I think you can do a lot better.

Another problem I see here is that you've gone overboard with the effects on some of the product photos. Keep it simple and show off the product rather than getting fancy with cutouts and such.

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Thank you, for the great comments again Megan. I am going to be totally revamping this site in the future. Hopefully more color, more "wow" but still clean and quick. I also think I need to get some professional photos for the clothing done, (wanna model? lol) anyways...

Thanks
Trevor

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Joined: Apr 2004

I got an error report on the accessories page, something about an unregistered cube. I would like to see a picture of a clothing item on the home page. I tend to be a fast surfer and if something does not interest me on the home page I don't bother with the rest.

Kathy

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