Site review of www.eservice4you.com

Anonymous posted this at 20:01 — 29th May 2000.

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I would appreciate all constructive comments about my site. Thanks in advance...

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Gail
www.eservice4you.com
One stop internet site for your personal and business life

Denmark 3 posted this at 20:19 — 29th May 2000.

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Here is a link so you don't have to type it in... http://www.eservice4you.com

I don't have time to Critique it right now as I haven't been feeling so good the past couple days. Which is why I haven't posted anything in a while. Hopefully I'll feel better later and be able to write some Critique's.

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RJ D'Angelo posted this at 23:35 — 29th May 2000.

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-The logo has to go, and when you make a new one, you need to keep it with the same background as the rest of the site so it blends in.

-Your navigation system needs to be improved. It might look OK where you have it, but replace it with graphics or something more flashy.

-You have too much going on in the page. Try cutting down on the clutter and add some more organization to it.

-Do not make the links so gigantic, and try using some CSS for the links.

-Keep playing around with designs. You never know what you might come up with.

GOOD LUCK!

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Justin S posted this at 02:26 — 30th May 2000.

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Uh, no...

Overall the site needs a complete overhaul. I don't feel like pointing out each and every reason now, 'cause I don't think this design can be improved. The logo needs to go, really need a better navigation, better color choice is needed also, and the layout is amateurish.

I know I sound rude and nasty, but it's the truth. Check out some HTML, design, and graphic development books, as well as check out some other sites like Altavista and Excite. If you like a design then go for something that looks like it...

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Brian Farkas posted this at 03:41 — 30th May 2000.

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Well... I'm going to agree with Justin that the site needs to be pretty much completely re-done. The logo was generated at one of those free online image places, and the layout/navigation structure isn't very good either. Honestly, there isn't too much from the current design that can be salvaged to make a decent looking design- your best bet would be to start over. Hire a professional designer, or read up on design yourself, maybe visit www.coolhomepages.com for ideas.

Good luck.

Brian Farkas

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