SITE HEADER REVIEW: my new site

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Please review the header I just made, tell me what you think. I am not all that great at graphics, but can do a little.

Any comments, negative or postive are welcome.

thanks,
Craig Sparks

http://www.biovelocity.com/new.gif

Megan's picture

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Looks good! Have you tried moving the text more into the grey space beside the icon? I'm not sure that would be the best idea but may be worth a try. The other thing is that the edges of the graphic look a little fuzzier than they should be. Try to sharpen those up a bit.

Otherwise a great job! I don't know why you say you're not all that great at graphics!

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I'll agree it's a good start, but I have a few nit-picky things.

First, like Megan said, show off your icon and get the font out of the way. Move it right or shrink it down.

I don't like the watermark text. You can't read it, so why have it? I say loose it alltogether.

Your gradient does not seem smooth enough, try to blend it more.

Megan already mentioned the fuzziness.

Good start csparks.

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thanks for you help guys!

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ang gals Wink

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Looks great, i want to see it in the site! Laughing out loud

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The idea seem cool, but the header needs some improvements like the guys just mentioned, the text, gradient and bevel have to be slightly touched...
Anyways, love the idea..

http://www.websolutionarchives.com

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