salemspark.com
Hey Everyone,
I just finished my latest project, and have it up and running, and looking for some review on it. It's a site that holds a flash cartoon based on the adventures of a bunny name Salem. This is my first time experimenting with flash animation, hope everyone likes it.
Check it out salemspark.com
heebiejeebieclu posted this at 19:26 — 9th May 2005.
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- Had to click five times to watch first episode
- Numerous spelling mistakes
- Powered by Word Press? I never new it could create whole sites... I'll have to look into that.
- Design = good
- Colour scheme is appropriate
- Front Page : What is this site?
- Gallery : not on main navigation?
- : add wallpapers for people to download?
red_ghost posted this at 19:57 — 9th May 2005.
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thanks heebiejeebieclu, what sort of spelling mistakes did you encounter?
andy206uk posted this at 23:12 — 9th May 2005.
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Nice... you really need to feature a direct link to the animation on your homepage. You have to click far too many times to get to the movie!
JeevesBond posted this at 12:13 — 10th May 2005.
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Very nice! I liked the animation, although - as said - you have to click a few too many times to get to the animation.
Design is a little dark for my tastes, but that's subjective.
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timjpriebe posted this at 12:16 — 10th May 2005.
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As others have said, the biggest deal is that you have to click too many times to watch the latest cartoon.
Looking good so far, though! I like the minimilist approach, and you've managed to pull it off well, albeit a tad dark. But that goes with the cartoon, I believe.
Tim
http://www.tandswebdesign.com
heebiejeebieclu posted this at 18:28 — 10th May 2005.
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"Spelling Mistakes"
-On the Flash movie, right at the beginning when it warns about the content
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