REVIEW REQUEST:www.fantasies-in-lace-lingerie.com

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okay this is my site:www.fantasies-in-lace-lingerie.com any feedback is welcomed and much appreciated.
regards,
fila

davidjaymz's picture

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Hi well its 4am but here goes...

Slight horizontal scroll at 800,600
the nav bar buts with the white main section at the top but overlaps at the bottom
Not all pictures formatted the same
Nav bar popups could be moved to right more so they sat next to orignal nav rather than over it
More organition of catorgories and such
I'm on a 56k modem and some pages took a while to load
To go along with the rest of the nav scheme maybe "links" and "size charts" should be in black...

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Welcome to TWF fila,

We do ask that you help out by reviewing some of the others sites posted here for critique.

I get a hsb on some pages and in NS4.78 on some of the pages the navigation is overlapping the main page part at 800*600, which is what is also causing the black part at the side to be different from the navigation. In Opera the navigation isn't working at all.

On some parts where you have things like the search results, the background strip is a light yellowy colour and I don't think that it looks too good as it's only just showing and looks like it's supposed to be white, I'd make this a more definite colour. A lot of the photos seem over compressed as well as they are either fuzzy or blotchy.

There seems to be some major incompatability with the site and Opera as it pulls up errors when trying to place items in the basket, which means anyone with Opera can't use the shop.

Julia - if life was meant to be easy Michael Angelo would have painted the floor....

disaster-master's picture

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I noticed that you have a curved edge corner at the top of the menu but after the menu loads you have a square corner there. In other words, your menu is wider than the side bar. Not really a big deal I don't guess....I just noticed it.

Oh the perils of dhtml menus. Laughing out loud If you are going to use that menu you should probably consider providing a secondary set of navigtion (maybe at the bottom of the page) so that you don't totally lock out your potential customers.

Might want to add some padding to the menu cells. The text is jammed up against the left side of my screen.

Need to get some better images. Or at least make the one on the home page look nice. Remember those first impressions.

You have a big choice of items here and I done a good job organizing all of it.

BTW......welcome to TWF!

Lukster's picture

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Hmm, you need to do somthing to that top bar, with the logo centered it looks very bare. Also because it is centered, it makes the left navbar look out of sync with the page. You also need to make that pic the full size, don't slice it down either side.

"Whenever you do a thing, act as if all the world were watching."

Online Data Backup? I'd like to see that!

z28cam's picture

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The Top looks unfinished, either add some eye candy or reposition your logo different to make it look better. Its 530am so if that doesn't make sense sorry LOL

Abhishek Reddy's picture

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I find the twinkling title and the animated search label rather distracting. Well, I guess the title could pass, but remove the color-changing from the search label. Wink

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Hi, I'm getting your main page but 'page not found' messages for all your categories. The main page seems well organised. The logo is ok. It feels a bit cheap, but maybe the lingerie is cheap. Who is your target customer? For a more upmarket product (and website) check out agentprovocateur.com

I agree that the image on the main page looks bad because it is cropped. If you need to crop it put it in some type of frame. Better to use a full body shot.

Richard

richardnicholson.com

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LOL, may I ask what your conversion rate for vistors to sales is on your site? My over all feed back is your site looks fine, yet you are trying to sell womens underwear to random males looking for naughty pics.

nicora's picture

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Joined: Nov 2001

OK, first I just want to point out the reply:view ratio, lol.

Let me just throw out some thoughts on the constructive criticism side.

- product thumbnail sizes should be consistent, maybe even stroke them (width:1px;)

- left nav with the curve is all to common, from a designers eye, I think that something more creative would be HUGE

- The header to seems like it could be minimized, or maybe filled up with something else

But, overall I think that the site was easy to navigate and, of course, easy to look at Smiling. Theese are just my little gripes.

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