Can you please review some of the other sites posted in the critique section as per the Posting Agreement and I'll come back once I've had a few more coffees and look at your site.
Julia - if life was meant to be easy Michael Angelo would have painted the floor....
I dont mean to be nasty but its a bit dull... Theres nothing on this portal that would encourage me to go back and visit again in the future, its just another portal, theres millions of sites out there nearly identical to yours.
You need something that either makes it stand out graphically or will appeal to a certain niché! otherwise its probably just a waste of webspace.
Firstly, get rid of the alert box that pops up telling or asking the user to vote for you.
The site looks ok and is quite consistant until you scroll down to the bottom, the bar above the copyright notice looks very out of place.
The bar up the top with the buttons could do with a rollover other wise it looks ok too.
Try to show that the links in your body area are actually links, at first I thought they were headings for the paragraph below it...that was until I hovered over by accident lol.
Over all it is jsut an OK site, there is still room for improvement.
The vote thing is still there. Get rid of it, that sucks. And it does keep asking me to load. The site itself is really cool... it just could lose a few bells and whistles that are annoying...
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The Webmistress posted this at 07:30 — 10th April 2003.
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Welcome to TWF,
Can you please review some of the other sites posted in the critique section as per the Posting Agreement and I'll come back once I've had a few more coffees and look at your site.
Julia - if life was meant to be easy Michael Angelo would have painted the floor....
bobat posted this at 09:16 — 10th April 2003.
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1024x768
ADSL
IE6
looks okay, may be you need a logo now to go in the top left corner.
jha2297255 posted this at 09:20 — 10th April 2003.
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Joined: Apr 2003
web stats image no go, couple blocked ads, I think they were ads, so that works out well, is this french? whats with spelling system sistem?
you only have 11 downloads, I dont think you need to tout them as "new" (zdnet probably has a million downloads)
something weird with the top across menu, it loads, but then the font resizes or something, very peculiar
-Josh
-Safety Fast-
andy206uk posted this at 10:28 — 10th April 2003.
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I dont mean to be nasty but its a bit dull... Theres nothing on this portal that would encourage me to go back and visit again in the future, its just another portal, theres millions of sites out there nearly identical to yours.
You need something that either makes it stand out graphically or will appeal to a certain niché! otherwise its probably just a waste of webspace.
Andy
customb posted this at 14:04 — 11th April 2003.
They have: 8 posts
Joined: Apr 2003
I would optimize the design for an 800 x 600 browser and correct some spelling errors for your english. Other than that you did a great job.
Renegade posted this at 04:09 — 12th April 2003.
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You have alot of white space in the content area and too much 'stuff' on the side.
Why the hell does it keep loading stuff every few seconds?
Quite frankly, there is nothing there that I need or want, it's in fact quite boring.
Sorry
Szenasi Joseph posted this at 09:03 — 13th April 2003.
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Joined: Apr 2003
I made some changes.. please tell me what do you think now..
Renegade posted this at 09:39 — 13th April 2003.
He has: 3,022 posts
Joined: Oct 2002
Firstly, get rid of the alert box that pops up telling or asking the user to vote for you.
The site looks ok and is quite consistant until you scroll down to the bottom, the bar above the copyright notice looks very out of place.
The bar up the top with the buttons could do with a rollover other wise it looks ok too.
Try to show that the links in your body area are actually links, at first I thought they were headings for the paragraph below it...that was until I hovered over by accident lol.
Over all it is jsut an OK site, there is still room for improvement.
oce222 posted this at 00:15 — 14th April 2003.
They have: 37 posts
Joined: Mar 2003
The vote thing is still there. Get rid of it, that sucks. And it does keep asking me to load. The site itself is really cool... it just could lose a few bells and whistles that are annoying...
gwi
gimme-five.com
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