Review request: www.funrunner.co.uk

They have: 5 posts

Joined: Feb 2003

dont know what i should write here.

review my site

Moderator's warning: site contains material that may be considered rude and/or distasteful to some people.

Busy's picture

He has: 6,151 posts

Joined: May 2001

Welcome to TWF, can you help as out as per the posting agreement and review at least 3 other sites, Thanks

Megan's picture

She has: 11,421 posts

Joined: Jun 1999

You could have warned us about your site contenet. We can't regulate your sense of humour here but I really didn't need to see that. It would also be a good idea to let us know a bit about what you're expecting from a review - do you want brutal honesty or should we be gentle?

They have: 5 posts

Joined: Feb 2003

whats wrong with my content?

be rough with me

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She has: 5,586 posts

Joined: Feb 2001

Welcome to TWF Andy.

We do ask that you help out some of the others here by reviewing some of their sites before asking for a critique of your own site. This will help you with ideas for your site and also to see what we like and dislike.

I think what Megan is trying to say is that some of the content on your site is rather unsavoury, especially the priceless pics! Not everyone finds them funny and they can be rather distastefull.

Please help out as I said before and I'll come back and have another look at your site when I have more time.

Julia - if life was meant to be easy Michael Angelo would have painted the floor....

They have: 14 posts

Joined: Feb 2003

The navgation of the site is a bit hard to use, and the colours are a bit harsh on the eye.

A fair few amusing pics though!!!

They have: 27 posts

Joined: Feb 2003

Its okay...the homepage needs some work, kind of just plain but keep it up!

They have: 5 posts

Joined: Feb 2003

I will be putting a warning on the priceless pics soon.

The Webmistress's picture

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Could you please help us out and review some of the others sites in the critique section please Andy Smiling

They have: 5 posts

Joined: Feb 2003

ive done that already

Busy's picture

He has: 6,151 posts

Joined: May 2001

to date you've done one review that contained "its a bit dull. Liven it up a bit"

The guidelines are there to help everyone as a general review from all angles can be very helpful.
Plus you'll find you'll get more replies to your site if you do 3 reviews or more

They have: 160 posts

Joined: Mar 2002

As a design teacher used to constantly harass me:

"I can't see the grid in your work."

I think he was overly grid oriented but there is something to be said for it. A really great book on usable visuals is "Designing Visual Interfaces" by Kevin Mullet and Darrell Sano.

Nothing seems to be aligned. This is somewhat disorienting. On a more complex page it can become very disorienting.

[email protected]

http://www.alogical.com

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They have: 6 posts

Joined: Feb 2003

Have to improve...Try to add some cool gfx

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