Review Request: www.fastsimplecash.com

They have: 13 posts

Joined: May 2004

Alright my site is fastsimplecash.com , as you can see, it looks like crap! I designed it using a free template and FrontPage. It sucks I know Mad ! Basically what im shooting for is a simple site to advertise my affilate links. What I'm lacking is programs to build the pages. If anyone could help me in anyway please post! I am planning on , later, making a new website that I plan on making bigger better websites that can actually make me some money! SO PLEASE HELP!!!!!!
Thanks Tim

My site has tons of free artiles on making money online, come and check it out www.fastsimplecash.com !

Busy's picture

He has: 6,151 posts

Joined: May 2001

Welcome to TWF, Could you PLEASE review a few other sites first, Thanks

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They have: 127 posts

Joined: Dec 2003

Well, you pretty muh hit the nail on the head. A few things:

-I see a few broken links.
-The design needs an overhaul

I hope you didnt pay for that template. If you are looking for a good program for page design, dreamweaver is good.

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Joined: May 2004

No I certainly did not pay for it! I am going to download a cleaner template. I am looking for somthing easy to use...dreamweaver is good eh? Ok ill have to check into it. Thanks-yes i know there are broken links, not even a part of those affilates anymore!

My site has tons of free artiles on making money online, come and check it out www.fastsimplecash.com !

They have: 4 posts

Joined: May 2004

hey buddy, your images are not working! If you want your site to look professional than make it a lighter color and add images.

Use Photoshop and ImageReady, they are the best you can get...and if you are looking for free templates go to ekindesigns.com/designs/ and let me know which one you like if any.

He has: 1,758 posts

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I reccomend for a professional look changing your font to arial or verdana. Times new roman just looks plain and outdated. Just that on it's own will improve your image.

Andy

They have: 13 posts

Joined: May 2004

Fastball I like 06 because it does not have any unneeded images. I really like
03 but it has those aliens that I do not like. Thanks for the help everyone, looks like I need to get dreamweaver.

My site has tons of free artiles on making money online, come and check it out www.fastsimplecash.com !

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They have: 127 posts

Joined: Dec 2003

You can download a 30 day trial of dreamweaver mx. If you want to buy it, I am going to warn you it will cost you like 400 bucks, unless you're a student and can get an academic version.

They have: 5 posts

Joined: May 2004

I think you should ante up on the template,and get dreamweaver or golive cs..

They have: 4 posts

Joined: May 2004

My suggestion to you is to align the top image to the left edge (width is 719 pix) or reduce the width (to ~ 560 pix) to fit in a standard browser.

He has: 4 posts

Joined: May 2004

1.) Like one said, the default font face shouldn't be used. Suggestions are: verdana, geneva, lucida, lucida grande, arial, helvetica, sans-serif

2.) Center-justifying everything is just plain wrong.

3.) While black backgrounds aren't always bad, they usually are. It brings back memories of the EFF/free speech days on the Internet.

4.) Where's the content? Reselling affiliate programs, it seems, won't fly.

They have: 8 posts

Joined: May 2004

your banner in the middle of your page isnt working...but i see the potential!!

They have: 14 posts

Joined: May 2004

I don't really care for it, but the blue and black do look good togther. Fix those images, please Laughing out loud And give the site a real title other then "title"
Add Fast Simple Cash between your tags.

They have: 13 posts

Joined: May 2004

Definitely invest in dreamweaver and photoshop/imageready if you're serious about designing.

They have: 36 posts

Joined: Nov 2003

There are many images missing/links broken. The email text is almost invisible on the blue background. You dont have a title. The site doesnt work on multiple window sizes. Like truetrev says, try getting dreamweaver and play with it some more

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He has: 18 posts

Joined: May 2004

I agree it is too plain. I think it was a nice effort though. With a little work, you can design a much better product i think. I'd be glad to offer help if you need it at no charge. My yahoo messenger is warbishop. Ona scale 1-10 so far, I give it a 4. Mainly because it lacks, like they stated already, originality. I would add some of the following:

1. better color scheme
2. A more professional page layout
3. some amount of interactiveness or ((((((POP))))))))

Every page needs a little"POP" to give it that "POPNESS" Smiling

Just dont overdue the POPNESS or youll get POOPNESS!

war
Cheers!

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