REVIEW REQUEST : Tenor's site
I have completed the main design for a clients site of mine. Please be brutal with your reviews, and critique anything you like/dont like about it. Do you like where the navigation is placed?
TIA.
I have completed the main design for a clients site of mine. Please be brutal with your reviews, and critique anything you like/dont like about it. Do you like where the navigation is placed?
TIA.
The Webmistress posted this at 18:04 — 29th December 2002.
She has: 5,586 posts
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Welcome to TWF,
I'm only just quickly passing in at the moment, so I'll have a good look at the site a bit later. In the meantime can you please follow the rules and review some of the other sites posted for critique please.
Julia - if life was meant to be easy Michael Angelo would have painted the floor....
AUDIgy posted this at 02:53 — 30th December 2002.
They have: 4 posts
Joined: Dec 2002
Sure thing.
Busy posted this at 06:35 — 30th December 2002.
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Joined: May 2001
Welcome to TWF, thanks for reviewing some sites, feel free to review more
It looks a little unfinished, not sure if I like the navigation way up there, it kind of looks out of place. maybe betwen the banner and text section would work better.
The bottom section is missing something too, maybe add navigation and copyright or date or something down there just to finish it off.
Instead of grey, maybe another light color, or a lighter grey, shame the guy was wearing a coloured shirt to introduce another color. maybe continue the ribbon effect from the banner into the text area as a muted background.
It has a slight alignment problem in NS4.7 - that's a css issue
The Webmistress posted this at 09:02 — 30th December 2002.
She has: 5,586 posts
Joined: Feb 2001
I agree with Busy that the navigation would look better between the header and main section. The layout is not bad but nothing special either! The greys make it feel dull and the font for the logo could be better, maybe a more script/handwriting so it's almost like his signature?? You have a good starting point but it needs colour to bring it alive.
Julia - if life was meant to be easy Michael Angelo would have painted the floor....
Renegade posted this at 09:46 — 30th December 2002.
He has: 3,022 posts
Joined: Oct 2002
The nav really looks out of place, and it does look a bit dull, try adding some more colours to it
disaster-master posted this at 19:36 — 30th December 2002.
She has: 2,154 posts
Joined: May 2001
I think you should use the first page as just a very brief introduction of Mr. Thomas and put the rest of the text on other pages. Maybe an about page. That really is a lot of reading and most people aren't going to read all that anyway in my opinion.
Nice start for the layout. I agree with putting the nav below the header graphic. It does look out of place up there in the top left corner.
Colors....a bit dull looking right now. Also, I don't think the blue/purple color goes well with the grays. But I do like the grays. Have you tried a white/offwhite or a really light gray background for the top part and use some color in the title name to liven things up a bit? just a thought.
I think someone has already mentioned adding a secondary set of nav links at the bottom. You could also stick a copyright notice down there too.
Sonia
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