We do ask that you review a couple of other sites before having your own site critiqued but I will go ahead and give my two cents while I am here.
Since there really isn't much to critique yet I will comment on the nice looking graphics at the top. I love how you did the image of the girl. One thing that I noticed is the links in the blue bar area a just a wee bit hard to read. Have you tried making them bold? That may not be the effect that you are looking for but I thought I would comment.
Maybe when you have more content, I will peek at it again.
Cheers,
Sonia
John Creed posted this at 06:59 — 19th April 2003.
I don't think you have enough content for a good review. But the graphics are nice and the colors could work...I guess. Although it doesn't really have a "humor" site look to me.
What kind of funny content are you intending to host? Also, because there is no content there now I assume it's a new site that has no traffic.
You have a lot of work ahead of you adding lots of your own content before anyone else will show up to add theirs.
The Webmistress posted this at 10:25 — 19th April 2003.
Hello
As said the colour choice is nice, seems orange blue and white are popular safe choices these days..
Content is needed though for proper critque.
But with a name like slapzone, what is it the site covers?, i was expecting comedy, so i presume thats what the clips are about, (i didnt click on any must confess)or is it a car site??
if im confused, then maybe others will be too
other than that its nice
Good luck with the site
Cymru am byth
jha2297255 posted this at 08:44 — 21st April 2003.
ewww lose the pop up surveys. make text larger. you should link the movie pic directly to wmv file. I was confused about where to click. Is that corvette really pulling 140? thats pretty sweet (personal best only 115)
unfortunately, windows player couldnt dl a decompressor?? I cant watch any of it. ah well. PS coming, not comming -Josh
nice header... didnt really get a "funny feeling" (if you'll excuse the pun) when i entered the site. The design comes across as too serious, which isnt very good for a comedy site.
Andy
biondosmith posted this at 22:11 — 24th April 2003.
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disaster-master posted this at 00:07 — 18th April 2003.
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Welcome to TWF slapzone.
We do ask that you review a couple of other sites before having your own site critiqued but I will go ahead and give my two cents while I am here.
Since there really isn't much to critique yet I will comment on the nice looking graphics at the top. I love how you did the image of the girl. One thing that I noticed is the links in the blue bar area a just a wee bit hard to read. Have you tried making them bold? That may not be the effect that you are looking for but I thought I would comment.
Maybe when you have more content, I will peek at it again.
Cheers,
Sonia
John Creed posted this at 06:59 — 19th April 2003.
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I don't think you have enough content for a good review. But the graphics are nice and the colors could work...I guess. Although it doesn't really have a "humor" site look to me.
What kind of funny content are you intending to host? Also, because there is no content there now I assume it's a new site that has no traffic.
You have a lot of work ahead of you adding lots of your own content before anyone else will show up to add theirs.
The Webmistress posted this at 10:25 — 19th April 2003.
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I agree that the graphics are very nice and so are the colours but does it really go with the subject matter (once you have content)?
spor posted this at 19:03 — 20th April 2003.
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Hello
As said the colour choice is nice, seems orange blue and white are popular safe choices these days..
Content is needed though for proper critque.
But with a name like slapzone, what is it the site covers?, i was expecting comedy, so i presume thats what the clips are about, (i didnt click on any must confess)or is it a car site??
if im confused, then maybe others will be too
other than that its nice
Good luck with the site
Cymru am byth
jha2297255 posted this at 08:44 — 21st April 2003.
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ewww lose the pop up surveys. make text larger. you should link the movie pic directly to wmv file. I was confused about where to click. Is that corvette really pulling 140? thats pretty sweet (personal best only 115)
unfortunately, windows player couldnt dl a decompressor?? I cant watch any of it. ah well. PS coming, not comming -Josh
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andy206uk posted this at 11:07 — 22nd April 2003.
He has: 1,758 posts
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nice header... didnt really get a "funny feeling" (if you'll excuse the pun) when i entered the site. The design comes across as too serious, which isnt very good for a comedy site.
Andy
biondosmith posted this at 22:11 — 24th April 2003.
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But there really isn't any content yet.
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