REVIEW REQUEST: nicora.com/vbyx

nicora's picture

He has: 267 posts

Joined: Nov 2001

Ignore the content, it's filler. And only "company info" and "services" is working. This is only a concept, but I thought that I could use some early feedback. Thanks in advance.

http://www.nicora.com/vbyx

disaster-master's picture

She has: 2,154 posts

Joined: May 2001

I think I like it. Smiling

It needs something but I understand what it is like trying to get that "concept thing" going....LOL

Really the only things that I see may need some work is the way you have the images on the right and the logo at the top. I think I see the effect that you are trying to achieve with the images but there is something that just isn't quiet right. Have you tried feathering the color part instead of having it squared off in a straight line? I don't know...that may not be what it needs.

The logo needs some color. Maybe do the text part in a yellow??

You are on the right track....keep trudging ahead.

Busy's picture

He has: 6,151 posts

Joined: May 2001

style="margin:0 0 0 0; background-color:#ffffff;" in your body tag isnt universal
either use standard html tags (marginwidth="0" ... background="??") or use the style sheet option.

what you have doesnt work in NS4.7 or Opera6

Another idea for the image at right. have the colored section more centered.
do you plan on using mouseover (a:hover) on your top links?
the patch up top, (vbyz section) and one on the other side of the page your on is slighty different colors.

nice concept Smiling

The Webmistress's picture

She has: 5,586 posts

Joined: Feb 2001

Nice site but it is very plain. I agree that maybe adding a colour to maybe the links on hover would add that something to it and it does get a bit lost on higher resolutions. You also need more of a descriptive title for the search engines to pick up on. I think that Veranda would make the text a bit more readable that small.

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Jack Michaelson's picture

He has: 1,733 posts

Joined: Dec 1999

Very nice site lay-out. I would add a vertical black line on the left of the 'company info' button. Although I think you deliberately left it away, I got the feeling that it's missing.

Overall: great job

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taff's picture

They have: 956 posts

Joined: Jun 2001

I like it! I agree that the nav could use some rollover effect.

They have: 34 posts

Joined: Feb 2002

Personally, I like top banners with a bit more spunk... since the bottom / filler of the site is rather simple, I'd put a bit more pizzazz (spelling?) into it...

It's very clean and business like... but needs a bit more life in it, in my opinion...

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