Review needed

nike_guy_man posted this at 22:03 — 8th February 2001.

Joined: Sep 2000

Hello
I created my 1st flash intro and I need someone to try it out.
The entire page isn't finished.
The graphics aren't good quality.
Please give me load time and a good review.
The theme is a girls fastpitch softball team.
Thanks in advance
http://parrabal.hypermart.net

mmi posted this at 22:31 — 9th February 2001.

They have: 457 posts

Joined: Jan 2001

your film played fine on my cable line - I ran the url through a checker and it estimated around 8 seconds on a 28.8 and 12 on a 14.4 - the "home" link comes up black for some reason on Netscape 4 - - since "link" as a BODY attribute is deprecated anyway, you might want to amend your style sheet to

A {font: 10pt; color: #FFFFFF; text-decoration: none;}
A:hover {font: 10pt; color: #000000; text-decoration: none;}

'or some other size - I think you also may want all these in one cell so they'll wrap at lower resolutions - I'm guessing you know the "12 and under" photo is unavailable - in your calendar, the cellpadding is set to "%3" - I think you may want plain old 3 - that should give you a margin in those cells - also, a number of those td's aren't closed although I guess you're being forgiven

- looks good so far !!

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if you do put the links in a single cell, I guess you'd want to "align=center" it as well

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