hmmm - so am i. Amyway, if you're going to add alot of features then why not add the following:
- customizable error pages
-pre installed php-nuke.
Anyway, onto the critique.
- the whole site looks a bit spammy and will therefore put off potential customers.
- After looking at the spammy layout I am not immediatley turned away because th offer is so good - but I am still not convinced - i need stats. How many people are using your service etc.
- also, your 99.1% uptime guarantee is hoax. I went on server status and 8/11 of the times checked it was red/down - 72.72727272727272 percent.
-you have a great package but that doesn't mea sales are secured - you've GOT to have a more reliable looking site 67%
ptrferdinand posted this at 17:19 — 20th February 2005.
heebiejeebieclu wrote: hmmm - so am i. Amyway, if you're going to add alot of features then why not add the following:
- customizable error pages
-pre installed php-nuke.
Anyway, onto the critique.
- the whole site looks a bit spammy and will therefore put off potential customers.
- After looking at the spammy layout I am not immediatley turned away because th offer is so good - but I am still not convinced - i need stats. How many people are using your service etc.
- also, your 99.1% uptime guarantee is hoax. I went on server status and 8/11 of the times checked it was red/down - 72.72727272727272 percent.
-you have a great package but that doesn't mea sales are secured - you've GOT to have a more reliable looking site 67%
I'll add to that, it looks like you got this little sheet of paper image off of a phpBB forum:
Imgage in your site-
phpBB image-
And please do get better price tags cause this one looks like a monkey made it:
Also, I've noticed a lot of sites make little people and use them....
You have a good use of images, you just need to develop a color scheme for your website. Website color schemes are the scheme of a good design - usually it only consists of three colors that go well with each other.
BTW, the three modules that are down in the server are fine. Everything else is up and running you n00bs. It's just stating that the server does have SSL encrypted pages, and a Telnet connection. Both aren't necessary unless you're a huge business like Microsoft...
ptrferdinand posted this at 04:36 — 21st February 2005.
dynamite wrote: You have a good use of images, you just need to develop a color scheme for your website. Website color schemes are the scheme of a good design - usually it only consists of three colors that go well with each other.
BTW, the three modules that are down in the server are fine. Everything else is up and running you n00bs. It's just stating that the server does have SSL encrypted pages, and a Telnet connection. Both aren't necessary unless you're a huge business like Microsoft...
What my friend here tried to say was... your site has too many similar colors. Change them up a bit, take away the spammy feeling, take away the creepy feelings of deja vu people have when they visit your site after posting on phpBB forums.... Re-do the site with quality in mind, you have a good service at an even better price, so advertise it appropriately, not with stoned midgets and cheap-looking price tags. It looks like something you would find at a swap meet.
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ptrferdinand posted this at 21:23 — 19th February 2005.
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Uhh... you sure know how to give a good deal, I'm gonna sign up!
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heebiejeebieclu posted this at 16:26 — 20th February 2005.
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hmmm - so am i. Amyway, if you're going to add alot of features then why not add the following:
- customizable error pages
-pre installed php-nuke.
Anyway, onto the critique.
- the whole site looks a bit spammy and will therefore put off potential customers.
- After looking at the spammy layout I am not immediatley turned away because th offer is so good - but I am still not convinced - i need stats. How many people are using your service etc.
- also, your 99.1% uptime guarantee is hoax. I went on server status and 8/11 of the times checked it was red/down - 72.72727272727272 percent.
-you have a great package but that doesn't mea sales are secured - you've GOT to have a more reliable looking site
67%
ptrferdinand posted this at 17:19 — 20th February 2005.
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I'll add to that, it looks like you got this little sheet of paper image off of a phpBB forum:
Imgage in your site-
phpBB image-
And please do get better price tags cause this one looks like a monkey made it:
Also, I've noticed a lot of sites make little people and use them....
But your guy looks stoned.
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heebiejeebieclu posted this at 18:15 — 20th February 2005.
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*snigger in background*
EGS posted this at 20:32 — 20th February 2005.
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You have a good use of images, you just need to develop a color scheme for your website. Website color schemes are the scheme of a good design - usually it only consists of three colors that go well with each other.
BTW, the three modules that are down in the server are fine. Everything else is up and running you n00bs. It's just stating that the server does have SSL encrypted pages, and a Telnet connection. Both aren't necessary unless you're a huge business like Microsoft...
ptrferdinand posted this at 04:36 — 21st February 2005.
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What my friend here tried to say was... your site has too many similar colors. Change them up a bit, take away the spammy feeling, take away the creepy feelings of deja vu people have when they visit your site after posting on phpBB forums.... Re-do the site with quality in mind, you have a good service at an even better price, so advertise it appropriately, not with stoned midgets and cheap-looking price tags. It looks like something you would find at a swap meet.
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petachok posted this at 05:00 — 21st February 2005.
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Try changing to 120 dpi and see how your layout looks, it's a bit off on my screen.
JeevesBond posted this at 13:05 — 21st February 2005.
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Woah! You guys are being a bit harsh... Constructive criticism is what's required!
Although the little person does look like he's just had a very good night out, perhaps you wish to change him
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ptrferdinand posted this at 21:45 — 21st February 2005.
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Heres some help man....
I re-did the price tag for you:
And I made you an add to cart button to market your hosting pakages:
Plus, I found a replacement to your picture that doesn't look stoned:
I also re-constructed your fetured product and company news bars:
If you need a logo, you can PM me and I'll give you the one I've already constructed.
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