please review my site....
Hi thanks for the initial feedback. I did some modifications to my site. Please I would appreciate any feedback GOOD or BAD. www.ijustgotplayed.com
Hi thanks for the initial feedback. I did some modifications to my site. Please I would appreciate any feedback GOOD or BAD. www.ijustgotplayed.com
jackchen posted this at 03:19 — 15th June 2000.
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*Chuckle*
Interesting site you have. I like the content.
The fonts are too big, make them smaller.
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RJ D'Angelo posted this at 10:43 — 15th June 2000.
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The layout is nothing special. You need another color and a different design.
The navbar looks isolated over there. You also need a better logo, and reduce the size of the font.
The high connection section takes too long to load. But the flash is pretty cool, except that it is really rough and staticy.
Keep playin around with designs until you find something.
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TheGraphicsExpe... posted this at 12:04 — 15th June 2000.
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The high speed connection loaded just as cool as cake for me.
I just think the inner site really is a disappointment, considering the opening flash intro.
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Justin S posted this at 13:57 — 15th June 2000.
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1) The splash page scrolls horizontally for me. You want to make it not scroll for 800x600 users.
2) You have the same problem as above on some of the sub-pages of the site.
3) It looks like you just stuck the menu bar on the site. It doesn't flow. You need to tie it in with the design somehow whether using your logo or some other way.
4) The fonts are too big on the site. Not just the content area font, but the size you use for your page headers is too big. You need to keep you "I Just Got Played.Com" logo on all pages, while at the same time keeping the page headers.
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Brooke posted this at 15:59 — 15th June 2000.
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I agree that the inner site was a dissappointment after the flash intro.
Brooke
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Jack Michaelson posted this at 08:02 — 16th June 2000.
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OK,
-Your innersite has a white bg and red as second color just like the startpage.
But the intro is very blue.
In other words: They don't match.
-How did you manage to make such a short flashmovie with the size of 352k ?????
-Maybe you should use tables to organize the contents of your pages.
-Try to make a catchy logo and matching bg.
Sorry, but I don't like it at all.
Jack
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Travis posted this at 17:46 — 16th June 2000.
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Wow a good flash animation to a not so great site.
Get rid of all the different sized text and the italic text, its looks like one of those get rich quick pages.
Also whats up with your meta tags on the page with the flash animation? You have too many repeated terms and 90% of them don't seem like they would go with your site.
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