please review my pay to subscribe Ezine

Many thanks to you guys, Your constructive critisism has helped me a lot, Thanks for being honest, now I wont waste my time and money on a website that won't rip anything, I'll consider all your comments and hopefully when we meet next time, I will bring to you a much improved site for you to review, THanks once again,

Humour4ever.

Here is my 2 cents (or 10..whatever):

1. Completely disorganized, I can't tell what relates to what.

2. The layout is simply horrible. I'm sorry, but you should seriously consider buying a book on web layouts and design.

3. The page seems to go on for eeeeeeeeeeeeever. Try some links.

4. The colors on this site are visually offensive...my eyes almost melted off my face as I surfed thru. Try looking over some color scheme books.

5. Waaaay too many scrolling marquees. WAY too many.

6. baby blue on yellow simply does not work...

7. the text on the ABOUT page is really hard to read because of the background gradient colors chosen..

8. You should seriously reconsider the membership price...30 bucks!!! you know how many calls i can make on 1800-collect with $30??!?!? ... A LOT!

9."Otherwise Third partes are excleded from this show" - Spellcheck if you please

10. "partnerships " - Codecheck if you please.

Okay, I won't rag on you any more. One last thing however, please get rid of that toothless face .... its not even funny, just irritating. Give serious consideration to buying a book on web design, I'm sure it will help you out a lot and ensure your success later on down the line.

Whew!!! Thats all folks!

I like the thing at the top where it curves. but you need to work on the colors there is just to many.

I find the indiscriminate use of colour visually disturbing.

No, I wouldn't pay that much to subscribe.

I wouldn't pay anything.

There are plenty of free humour sites out there.

graphic:2
organization:1

You have to study.

good luck!!!

semio

Wow the colors! Green on red may be nice holiday colors, but my oh my i couldn't read it becasue it bothered my eyes too much. Then you have yellow/orange on a light yellow backgound. There were several areas where the colors just stood out, and to me, not in a good way.

The chart listing your prices is too complex, and why the different buttons for paying, is there a difference? To be honest, from what I see on that page, I wouldn't subscribe, there is just too much free humor on the web. If I did subscribe, will I still have to deal with the pop-up ads?

Sorry to be such a downer, but this site just does not agree with me. The colors and layout scream "newbie webmaster", and while everyone starts somewhere, it needs mastered before asking for payments.

I just noticed the title of your page (as displayed in my browser): Subscribe page of the Funniest humour Ezine on the Internet humour, gag, practical jokes

Was the ment to be there? This led me to look at the rest of the code for the page... You have a call to javascript that is between the HEAD and BODY, not in one of those. Be sure to clean up the code when you are all done, ie:

The following also be cleaned up, there is a lot of unecessary tags (calling after setting a font size, several [email protected], yet on another page you list that you are an Incorporated company in the USA. This is something that to me, sets off a red flag, and would prevent me from paying if I was thinking of doing it otherwise.

Well I'll leave it at that for now, I did enjoy some of the content of the site, just needs better layout IMO.

-Greg

PS, down by the picture of the kitty, what exactly are we guessing at, is it the the text above with the non letter font? If so, what can I win if I e-mail ya