Please help me to improve my site! Thanks!
I just published my e-commerce site and I need your suggestion to improve it. Some pages are still under construction and not function very well.
Please view: http://playandplay.net76.net/
Do you think my site is succeed in persuading visitor to purchase the items?
Your help is greatly appreciated!
ella1985 posted this at 10:46 — 17th May 2011.
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It's looks professional for a e-commerce website. Well designed and clear structured with an easy navigation bar. Only thing that bother me is logo which should me more colorful and bigger.
Markwest posted this at 11:42 — 17th May 2011.
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Joined: Apr 2011
Overall, it's pretty good. Nice work!
From my side, the only thing I would recommend to change is that different fonts usage. You have too much various fonts and fonts colors, some of them are quite hard to read
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vacshop posted this at 17:40 — 30th May 2011.
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First of all, it's easy to look at. Your pictures are very good and look professional. It' clean which I think helps if you're trying to sell used stuff, especially for kids.
You don't have a lot to offer yet, but I assume that's because you're a new site. Have you thought of checking out yard sales and thrift stores? You can't sell it if you don't stock it. We sold over fifty of our kid's old toys and stuffed animals at .25 and .50 cents apiece last summer and they were all in great condition. How about adding kids books or videos along with the toys.
Now, please don't take this the wrong way, but you either need to slow down and re-read your text or have someone else critique it for you. You're missing a few s's here and there and a few in's and an's. For instance on the home page your sentence that reads "You can always find great deal." should be changed to "You can always find great deals." or "You can always find a great deal." also the phrase that says "Just show us the toys your kids are not interested any more" should have the word 'in' after interested. Kinda picky, I know but it's just more professional to use proper english.
I'm personally not too thrilled about a shopping cart that opens in a new window. I prefer to stay on the same page. Can you instead, put a "continue shopping" button on the PayPal shopping cart so a customer can easily come back to you if they want to buy more?
Overall, a nice looking site that is easy to buy from. Just one last possible issue; Do you need permission from Disney to use that Mickey Mouse?
Paul
The Vacuum Cleaner Shop
aditd posted this at 23:00 — 13th June 2011.
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Joined: Apr 2011
The site is quite ok. The design is also great.
What you should work on is the domain. Is seems it is a free domain ... and that does not inspire me to buy.
airun0622 posted this at 03:29 — 22nd June 2011.
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Joined: Jun 2011
the site is great!But i do not like the middle part of the page.
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