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johnnyboy posted this at 11:41 — 2nd February 2000.

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It is thistlehillonline.com. it's a Bed & Breakfast web site. Tell me what you think. I'd really like some opinions.

Thnaks in advance! John

jili1 posted this at 13:00 — 2nd February 2000.

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Makes me want to get away...I liked it!! I am no expert like the bigwigs here but, I thought it looked really good!

Justin S posted this at 14:55 — 2nd February 2000.

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I like it. Not too futuristic (which is good), but not to - er - non-futuristic. Anyway- here is what I have to say:

I really like your logo, but you made it too small for the second color name. What I mean is, you can tell that "Bed and Breakfast" in the brown color is cut off on the bottom. I would fix this.

I don't know if I like the image flips, but if you do then I just have one comment: I would make an original image that it flips back to that says something like "Welcome to Thistle Hill." Something like that, so it doesn't look empty.

Lastly, I would put your logo and address on ever one of your pages, not just the main page.

Overall it's pretty good.

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Megan posted this at 15:41 — 2nd February 2000.

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Hmm.... just not quite right for some reason. You need some more design elements I think. A navigation bar and logo with more colour maybe. It looks too plain to me.

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Anonymous posted this at 00:09 — 3rd February 2000.

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Im Back!


    Good Points

  • Loads quick.
  • Simple Design
  • Nice Pictures
  • Easy to navigate.
  • Liked how you had Newspaper stuff, the map, and the guest comments. The comments will make people want to come.

    • Bad Points

  • On the image flip thing not all the text that pops up on the left looks the same. Some has lots of grayish color on the bottom and some don't. ?
  • Very hard to remember Domain Name. If you can change that do it.
  • Logo is in a different place on like every page! On some there is no logo.

    • Things To Add

  • Link to e-mail you if they have more questions. I searched and couldn't find one.

    It makes me want to go away too. Have a nice day. Change those few things and you will have almost a perfect site.

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    ~Parker~

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