need site review truth plz!

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This is my second design ever so what do u think
*removed by me* and by last design
is at *removed by me* which i done
last year about the same time. Since then I have improved alot what do u think. Note only some Media links work eg Screen Savers let me know what I should change etc
Thanks alot
new link http://www.loisandclark.net/index.php3?id=main

[Edited by loisandclark on 09-04-2000 at 03:28 PM]

loisandclark.net

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1). Logo...? I see none, and it had me really guessing what the site was called [in fact, I just made up a name which has nothing to do with Lois and Clark. :D]

2). The table mixes effects, which makes it look bad. I'd say add scanlines to all of the cells, and then make all of the cells of the same color touching each other. You could separate these through a means of horizontal rules, or a small graphic.

3). What's 'Set' mean? Also, the mailing list thing just kind of hangs off in outer space [hmm.. didn't I see an episode where..]

4). What's the purpose of the IP and Browser detection?

5). The current logo-type image doesn't touch the table cells, which throws off the design -a lot.-

Looks good, but could use improvement.

Mike Fisher - TWF Conquerer
"Don't trust a spiritual leader that cannot dance."

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I tried but neither of the links work.

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I can't get to it either.

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Both main site and link does not work

Does it work at your end?

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I just checked the link tell me what error message you are getting! or does it say access denied? Thanks It does work for me!

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It's working now, but I see you've deleted the link to the old design.

I really like the this design. It's easy to read and navigate and visually appealing. Good Work!

The only thing I would change in the design is put more "cellpadding" in the table so that the text would have room to breath...

Other than design, I think there are some spelling/grammar mistakes un places. You should give the site another look in that respect.

By the way, why not change the Vbulletin logo to your own logo in the forums?

Good luck!

Anat.

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Thanks If Your Still Interested the old design is at
http://www.amjad9.freeserve.co.uk/index2.htm its my first
ever design so be warned!!! Thanks I know about the spelling mistakes thanks for the cellpaddin advice!
I will do that! I havent launched the site yet so will
change the logo before i do so! Thanks again

loisandclark.net

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http://www.loisandclark.net/index.php3?id=main

I like it. Looks nice.

Nice top pic. Did you run it through Adobe Image Ready
to optimize it?

Is worth doing if you haven't done it.

Good start. Let me know when there is more.

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