My Site, Review at your own Risk

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Here is my site http://dlo.net . While it contains no nudity, it has offencive language that may be offencive to anyone who does not like strong langauge, or feels that strong language is for people with poor vocabulary and don't know enough words to express themselves.

Anyhow, check it out, speak your mind.

Please Note: The forums aren't switched to the new layout

Please also Note: I programmed every script on the page.

Enjoy

Brian Farkas's picture

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Looks nice- the only thing I would change is that the profile line on the right does not quite match up to the box.

Also, the line on the right side of the main content area doesn't match up with the top on the first page. Finally, on the article sub pages you should include the line on the right of the content area as well. Fix those things, and you'll have a great site. Good job!

Brian Farkas

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Randall,

I liked the layout. Very nice for the type of market you're trying to reach. Navigation seemed clear a well thought out.

John

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John- his name's Randall

Brian

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*LOL*

But anyway, the site is very good. Cool design. I like the left menu bar, except for its mouseovers. Make it more obvious.

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1) There needs to be something on the top bar. If you have a network of sites, then that's where I would list them. If not, then you need to figure out something.

2) The logo is cool, but it's a bit boring. It needs to be spiced up a little. Maybe you could add a few more colors to it so it will stand out more.

3) Menu works good. Personally I like bullets next to each menu link, but that's up to you. It makes it look more organized IMO.

Other then that I like it...

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Looks awfully hot to me!

Nice design, good use of tables and stylesheets.

The VERY greenish headers could hurt people with a very bright monitor a bit, but you shouldn't worry about that I think.

And, what I would try is to stretch the right menu bar a bit. Things get a bit boring when you venture lower into the first page.

But overall, I give it an 8.5 out of 10.

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Joined: Feb 2000

Hey,

- It looks very good. The colors are good, not to hard on the eyes and it just looks great.

- The only thing I can say and I agree with Justin here...you need to add more to the top. Like if you have a network of sites put them there or something. It seems like a lot of empty space next to and over the logo.

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Joined: Jul 1999

I love the page. It definitly gives the feeling that its content does. DON'T change the colors. The radar like look is what makes the site. Personally I wouldn't add anything to the top bar. It detracts from the site as a whole and would appear just like you were trying to fill space. Love it!

Brian Wilmot

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