My First Logo... Please Critique it !!!
Hello I am fairly new to photoshop but from experimenting i made this http://www.geocities.com/tukno/ (the logo is on the webpage.) It is quite simple but I think it is fairly good!
What do you guys think about it?
What should I do to make it look better?
Once again the address where you can find it is:
http://www.geocities.com/tukno/
I chose not to post my logo on this forum because i feel the color background on my website suits it better then the forum colors do!
Although it does not say on the site this logo is a copyright of Adam Schlichter, 2000...
Thankyou in advance for critique this logo!!
-Quickstrike
doren posted this at 20:50 — 19th September 2000.
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Not bad.
My favorite logo is the Sun logo. Ingenious.
Mark Hensler posted this at 00:09 — 20th September 2000.
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It's simple, but clean.
Brian Farkas posted this at 02:34 — 20th September 2000.
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Moved from graphics/design help forums --> web site critique area.
- Brian
Justin S posted this at 19:32 — 20th September 2000.
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I don't like it much. It looks old fashioned. Like it was made in MS Paint. The background color of the page doesn't help it at all either.
- Too big.
- Ugly green color. But that's just my opinion.
- Doesn't go with the bg color.
- Looks old fashioned. Like it was made in MS Paint.
I say get a good graphic design book then try making a logo.
Justin Stayton - [email] [icq]
Denmark 3 posted this at 02:17 — 21st September 2000.
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I think it looks good. It is very big though. It's nice and simple and very clean. Like Justin said it looks old fashion. Make it look newer and more modern. Then it will be great!
Mike Fisher posted this at 03:25 — 21st September 2000.
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Erm.. [because I reply to everything even if I don't have an answer] I must withdrawl my opinion, because I am an Abstract Designer, and shouldn't review contemporary designs because I'd have a slant to the Abstract.
Mike Fisher - TWF Conquerer
"Don't trust a spiritual leader that cannot dance."
Technel posted this at 00:08 — 26th September 2000.
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Not bad,
It is clean
Try using up the negative space
Try a nicer font in the lower section
The green is...well unusual. If you want to keep the green try working a small amount of white in to counter balance the solid look.
Have a good one
Doug
Brooke posted this at 22:36 — 26th September 2000.
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A couple of things:
I don't understand the point of the empty space at the top.
I would try to do something more with the font - it's just straight text and really doesn't stand out. You really want the logo clean and cohesive. It's the one thing that people see first.
I personally think that colors do not go well together. All except for the two greens in the box. Those go together. But the bright green dollar sign and the bright blue background just need to go. If you want to use those two greens, trying picking a marroon, tan, brown, navy blue....
Brooke
JP Stones posted this at 17:22 — 27th September 2000.
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I don't actually like the sun logo. It just does not hit me as a good brand identity.
JP
benji posted this at 20:20 — 27th September 2000.
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Turn the green into Blue and see what it looks like.
The green and blue don't mix.
Medrecki posted this at 19:37 — 28th September 2000.
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try useing amore modern looking font.
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