My first Attempt in site making...

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Joined: Jun 2006

Now i know most people will say, dont have your page critiqued until it is finished but i sam trying to look for some improvments as i go. Right now the page is still under heavy construction. I am working mostly on the basic layout of the page, hoping that people may like the way it is right now. any comments on page design would be helpful, and much appreciated. Thanks in advance.

Willie
Fearless leader of the Nobots

thenobots.com

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PS Some language on the site may be considered offensive by a few people, please be careful
(there is no pornography or vulgar comments, just some 4 letter words)

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waffles's picture

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Joined: Jun 2006

Typo in the banner. You missed the "s" in procrastination. Which was a bit hard to pick up on because the whole thing is hard to read anyway. I'd change that.

Get some roll overs on your navigation. It always looks better when you do that.

Put some padding on your content area. It makes it easier to read when you don't have the text pushed right up against the left edge.

What is that robot banner doing on the left side of the main page? It looks like I should be able to click it for content. But it doesn't do anything at all.

Make it a fluid design. Not everyone uses 1024x768, and not everyone who does has the browser maximized. And even some of those who do have the sidebar open.

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Acadia's picture

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Joined: Jul 2006

Put a thing at the bottom that says Last Updated: August 9, 1998.

I guess that's more of a joke critique than a design critique, but still.

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Joined: Jul 2006

A different style of design i've ever seen

Nomax5's picture

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Joined: Apr 2006

I like it its in your face, radical, rebelish - I hope those words and phrases are popular at the moment ><
I don't know what it does or is going to do but I like the look n feel
you could perhaps find Maddox on the net for inspiration and to give you an idea how far you can go and what's lies down the road you're on Wink
maddox is reputed to have The Best Page In the Universe.

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