Look at my new design - http://www.21studios.com/test

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I think you should center the design. I'm also not sure what I think about the mix between textured bg and non-textured buttons.

Still this site has a lot of potential and you have improved in your design skills significantly since you first laid a site out for review at TWF Smiling
JP

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http://www.21studios.com/test - The splash page you guys already reviews, just look at the rest, except for the "free stuff " page its not done. Thanks Alot.
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Ken p
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Hello,
- to jim,
I split up my graphics to squeze all of the fast load time i could. i know the tables arent the same size, but they are lined up on my computer. i have tried it in 640 by 480/ 800 by 600 / and whatever one is the next biggest, and it looked fine. It is a good idea to make the text the same color as the rollover text, i will have to try it out.
- to jp
I will center the design, i forgot. Thanks for the complaments too! : )
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Hi Ken,

I like the look of the pages. It might be nice to use the same colors for the text on the intro page as the rollover colors on the secondary pages. Also the frame graphic on the right hand side did not line up. Is there a reason that you split your graphics up into so many little graphics? Seems that it would be harder to line things up. Also your table sizes are different.

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My goal in life is found in Phillipians 4:8-9

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Hey Ken,

Just thought I would give you a peek at what the edge looks like on my computer
shoutingrock.org/Assets/Images/21studios.jpg

Unlike JP I liked the mismatched backgrounds. Keep up the great work.

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Hey Jim,
What do you use for browsing the net'?

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I like the subpages too. The lines match up fine on my screen. I like the mismatches mouseover colors. The text at the bottom that says "Graphics, Layout, Design © 1999 21 Studios.com" you should make an image, I think it would look better. I don't like the main test page though.

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Nice, good consistent design. But...

- Pale blue text on a white background... bad! Picking colours that you like is certainly good, but if people have to start squinting to read it, it's not good.

- The spherical 21 in the upper left should link to the main page.

- I'm assuming that you didn't want to say that graphics become "personal propriety" of the client. Personal propriety basically means someone's sense of what's moral and proper, or in another meaning an aspect of a person (not a perfect definition, but close enough). You're looking for "personal property".

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I agree, go for a darker blue/black on the white bg.
JP

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