LifeForceOnlineStore.com
Looking for a site review on http://www.wolfrivercountryvillage.com. Please review my site and let me know what you think. Would especially like any and all suggestions on how to get a better ranking in the search engines, & features that can be added.
A New Shopping Experience
http://www.wolfrivercountryvillage.com
demonhale posted this at 01:13 — 28th June 2005.
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I think your site is better looking than competition; I suggest that you have a custom logo made for your site, I notice that the competition posted much of their awards (real or not), customers sometimes need this little assurance to buy from a certain site. I think they had their web presence for quite a while now, and yours is new. By time you might out grow him, you just need to grow your site from the bottom. If you provide good service and good product, word will spread and youll be surprised how much your site is gonna prosper. Now a way to promote your site is by exchanging links to legal sites related to yours but is not a direct competitor, more links will mean higher ranks. This is just one of the factors...
BRCI posted this at 16:37 — 28th June 2005.
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Thank you for your review. I really appreciate it. I have pretty much been told on other forums that I have no chance because he is paying for some of his rankings. Right now I am working on setting up back links. I run a directory at http://www.BestHealthDirectory.com and I am offering sponsored listings to those who link to my site from their from page. We will see how this works.
Those awards are all real ... or so he says. But some of them are sooooo easy to get. My customers really like my site. The especially like the new live support. I think that has really helped my site a lot.
I have an advertisement going out in a fitness newsletter next monday that will be delivered to 400,000+ subscribers ... that is why I need some really good serious reviews.
Thanks again!
A New Shopping Experience
http://www.wolfrivercountryvillage.com
BRCI posted this at 16:40 — 28th June 2005.
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If anyone has time and would like to donate a "custom" logo to my site please feel free to contact me. I would be eternally grateful and will link to your site or service from all my other sites .... gopinsight.com, allstarbusinessservices.com, lifeforceonlinestore.com, besthealthdirectory.com, and a few others.
A New Shopping Experience
http://www.wolfrivercountryvillage.com
demonhale posted this at 00:41 — 29th June 2005.
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Do you own the labels on your Medicine Bottles...
The Image of a man raising up his arms to the light on that bottle would be a cool logo...
Anyway, be patient with others feedbacks here...
CaptainMorgan posted this at 01:12 — 29th June 2005.
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Well, Im new to this but I have to say after looking through a lot of reviews yours made me want to post.
Your site is very professional and very easy on the eyes. I think your one drawback is the lacking of more visuals, take that with a grain of salt as Im just calling it like a newbie. When I looked at your comp's site - I was immediately drawn to the skeleton pic but after moving on, I didn't really care for the setup. I find your layout more appealing, and simply more professional... I think you need more visually positive pics more so than a lot of bottles. However if you can somehow do it without going cheesy like your comp, I think you'd fare better. Maybe consider fine art.. like your pic of the building - sharp looking building and a nice touch to your site.. think further along that idea. I like the name of your brand more.. and I also agree with the logo idea.
Overall impression is A- but still on top of your competition and I believe you'll do better in the long run than your comp, basing solely on sites of course. Nice job.
Drink responsibly.. Capt. was here.
dataNdesigns posted this at 13:15 — 29th June 2005.
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I have thrown together a couple of ideas for a logo.
Its here http://www.datandesigns.com.au/images/lifeforce.jpg
Also I agree with the others your site is clean and professional, a large inprovement on your competitor.
CaptainMorgan posted this at 14:42 — 29th June 2005.
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Very nice. Looks quite scientific actually, I can relate math, physics and biology to that pic. Maybe leave Life Force the way it is, putting the additional text in small font directly below the large font..... .02
Drink responsibly.. Capt. was here.
BRCI posted this at 14:02 — 29th June 2005.
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Thanks for all the good suggestions. I agree ... I need more graphics than bottles ... sounds bad. I need happy people. I will look for some and get them added.
Thanks for the sample logos. I need a logo that looks a little more scientific or healthwise and the logo has to say "Life Force Online Store" it can't just say "Life Force". Any and all help is appreciated.
A New Shopping Experience
http://www.wolfrivercountryvillage.com
demonhale posted this at 14:05 — 29th June 2005.
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Cool one Data...
Anyways if yourlifeforce replied on my previous post,
Ill make one based on that
dataNdesigns posted this at 15:13 — 29th June 2005.
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Sorry dont have time at the moment to do any more but feel free to change that design if it suits, demonhale said hes going to make one, so it mite be more along the line of what you are thinking.
BRCI posted this at 21:15 — 29th June 2005.
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I really appreciate all your help with this you guys. I added a women to the front page. She looks happy ... and healthy.
I look forward to seeing demonhale's logo. The other logo was ok ... maybe is was just the color ... it almost looks like a swirling pick. Looked cool but I just don't think it would go well with the site. I could be wrong though (I usually am ... or so my lady thinks)
A New Shopping Experience
http://www.wolfrivercountryvillage.com
BRCI posted this at 21:17 — 29th June 2005.
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Anyone know where I could find some good live chat buttons. Everything I have found so far hasn't tricked my trigger. I am very picky HAHAHA
BRCI posted this at 22:37 — 29th June 2005.
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Nevermind on the chat buttons ... found some
demonhale posted this at 02:43 — 30th June 2005.
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Okay Heres a Logo (Meaning no words or the like)
I made it bigger here so that if you chose to small it down it would still look good...
LOGO:
http://www.webmaster-forums.net/attachment.php?attachmentid=103&stc=1
LOGO with TEXT:
http://www.webmaster-forums.net/attachment.php?attachmentid=104&stc=1
dataNdesigns posted this at 05:49 — 30th June 2005.
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Demonhale, that looks fantastic! do you want a job?
demonhale posted this at 14:58 — 30th June 2005.
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I may. what have you got in mind....
By the way yourlifeforce, check your mail I sent you the pics
BRCI posted this at 20:02 — 30th June 2005.
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Take a look at the stie now ... http://www.lifeforceonlinestore.com. How does the logo look? (or you can see the logo by going to http://www.lifeforceonlinestore.com/img/logo.gif but you need to see it in the template too). I took the awesome graphic that was made and just changed the text. Like ... no like? Suggestions?
A New Shopping Experience
http://www.wolfrivercountryvillage.com
BRCI posted this at 14:17 — 30th June 2005.
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WOW ... Great job!! Could you send it to me in an ai file or a psd so I can work with the colors ... I put it on the site and it kinda clashed. I have saved a screenshot of the logo on the site at http://www.lifeforceonlinestore.com/screenshot.jpg.
My email address is [email protected]
Thanks a ton ... you have truly made my day.
A New Shopping Experience
http://www.wolfrivercountryvillage.com
dataNdesigns posted this at 22:51 — 30th June 2005.
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yourlifeforce, looks fantastic, good work.
dataNdesigns posted this at 22:53 — 30th June 2005.
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demonhale, swing me an email I will send you through some details and talk to you further about it.
BRCI posted this at 12:33 — 1st July 2005.
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Sounds like everyone got a good deal here. I got a awesome logo and demonhale may have got a job! Sweet!
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