Last chance :)
Last chance for you guys to tell me whats wrong with it:) This is the last time Im gonna ask for a critique on my site. I think what I came up with this time looks fine. But I thought I would let you guys have one last go at it.
Thanks
Brooke posted this at 22:51 — 6th December 2001.
She has: 681 posts
Joined: Feb 1999
I really dislike pop up boxes - but the rest of your site looks really great!
Brooke :snow:
Abhishek Reddy posted this at 23:53 — 6th December 2001.
He has: 3,348 posts
Joined: Jul 2001
Looks good.
You may want to tighten up some spelling errors. I didn't go through it all, so I don't know all the errors - just run it through a spell check.
And it takes a bit to download on 56K. Twenty-two seconds is way too long. (Yes, I counted .)
The pop-ups are plain annoying. Maybe I should rant on about it?
mairving posted this at 02:12 — 7th December 2001.
They have: 2,256 posts
Joined: Feb 2001
Yeah, fix those spelling/grammar errors.
Haveing - having
Are you neighbors - Are your neighbors.
blow some steam. - blow off some steam.
It is also quite offensive to use the word retarded in the sense that you are using it. I know that you don't mean anything by it but it is somewhat offensive in print.
I would also consider having less 'eyeshadow' around your letters. They are just a bit too shadowy.
Pop-ups right in the middle of your site that cover your navs and annoy people. Are they worth it?
The Home button should be the first in the navbar or at the top, where it can be found easily.
Mark Irving
I have a mind like a steel trap; it is rusty and illegal in 47 states
Megan posted this at 02:19 — 7th December 2001.
She has: 11,421 posts
Joined: Jun 1999
Looks good. Try putting a sample rant of some sort on the front page so people can get an idea of what this is about. This might also entice them to look further into the site and maybe participate themselves. Maybe just a quote or something like that with a "read more" link.
Also try to reduce the contrast on that striped background - its a little overwhelming. And change your font to a sans-serif.
Megan
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1st posted this at 06:46 — 7th December 2001.
They have: 58 posts
Joined: Mar 2001
I agree with the sample rant idea...
z28cam posted this at 07:11 — 7th December 2001.
They have: 102 posts
Joined: Oct 2001
Thanks peeps
Your comments and suggestions are much appreciated.
The Webmistress posted this at 09:26 — 7th December 2001.
She has: 5,586 posts
Joined: Feb 2001
I still don't like the stripes but that is obviously personal to me
You need to think about your meta tags - the description really wouldn't tell people much about your site (& may actually scare them off!) and the title needs to be more descriptive containing keywords for the search engines to pick up on.
Change the text font to Veranda as it's much easier to read.
Julia - if life was meant to be easy Michael Angelo would have painted the floor....
z28cam posted this at 09:56 — 7th December 2001.
They have: 102 posts
Joined: Oct 2001
Yup, I wasn't worried about my meta tags yet. I wanted to get the look down first. I just put the tags up so i could work with them later, If that makes any sense
*~*GraphicsForHire*~*
The Webmistress posted this at 10:01 — 7th December 2001.
She has: 5,586 posts
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Just as long as you don't forget! Have had many clients in the past who already had sites and someone put a few tags in just so they were there and then forgot to change them over when the site was finished and the clients wondered why they never got into any SE's!
Julia - if life was meant to be easy Michael Angelo would have painted the floor....
bubba posted this at 20:26 — 7th December 2001.
They have: 11 posts
Joined: Nov 2001
I looked at your site in IE 5.5, NS 6.1, and ns 4.76 @ 1280X1024.
1) ns 4.76 looked fine
2) Both IE 5.5 and ns6.1 offset the yellow lines at the top (~5 pixels) with the left section lower then the right. there were also spaces between your navigation images on the right and 4 rectangles cut out of the white background at the top and bottom(cells had black background)
3)I don't like popups either especially on the first page, they might be more acceptable as exit popups.
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