Juggle It All - Team Website...
Hello everyone,
i took a template and ajusted it a fair bit and then made it into a website.
I have done this for my older brothers website.
www.juggleitall.org
Please tell me what you think?
Hello everyone,
i took a template and ajusted it a fair bit and then made it into a website.
I have done this for my older brothers website.
www.juggleitall.org
Please tell me what you think?
Megan posted this at 14:33 — 1st June 2008.
She has: 11,421 posts
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This looks pretty good. I think it should be fine for your purposes. A few things I've noticed:
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allenion posted this at 12:35 — 2nd June 2008.
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Joined: Jun 2008
Agree with Megan thought that I had left the site when I went onto photo gallery and then had to search for return link to home page.Can you at least put a consistant header across all pages
http://validator.w3.org/ shows 49 fatal errors on home page
Personaly I would make the booking page look very different from the contact page maybe explain what you get etc and then use the contact page for the query
good luck
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greg posted this at 01:53 — 13th June 2008.
He has: 1,581 posts
Joined: Nov 2005
It's quite a tidy site.
Megan has listed the main things.
Your main 'issue' is the wording and descriptions.
The first thing I read is that you are a "Kent based performance company" and you "cater for all events and occasions."
Then I have to scroll down for more info and look around the site for what you actually offer. Even then info is very scarce
"All events and occasions" is something you can relate to with your knowledge of what you offer, anyone else unconnected to your company have no idea what you offer from that.
EG
"We provide for all aspects for children's parties, festivals, shows and other events. Whether your requirement is small or large blah.."
You tell me to "drop you a quote" ?? What do you want me to quote you for? Or should that be "Apply for a free quote"
So the first text I get, and only thing I get without scrolling, is misleading and uninformative.
The first 10 seconds should draw your potential clients in. People leave very easily as there is a lot of options out there.
You have a lot of space between the text on the left and the white juggling clipart on the right, don't make it cluttered, but a slightly smaller font size and a bit more text across a larger sentence width would be better IMO - Especially the booking page
I suppose telling me your site has officially opened on a live website I am viewing is not the end of the world, but the space certainly could be used more effectively.
And perhaps re-think some of your meta keywords. Not to add some more, but quite a few of them are a bit meaningless, especially these two "all" and "it" ?
And a link on your site (more photos) that goes to a page with completely different design/colours/layout feels like it was an external link and I'm now on someone else's site.
The site is smart and tidy though, just needs tweaking really.
pr0gr4mm3r posted this at 02:07 — 13th June 2008.
He has: 1,502 posts
Joined: Sep 2006
Your forums don't seem to be working properly. I also see that you are using phpBB 2.x. Version 3.x is out and if you are stating a forum from scratch, you should use the latest version. If you need help setting it up, just ask.
I would agree that the different areas of the website to look at least similar, even if it's just adding a navigation bar to the top that's the same in all areas.
Michael James Swan posted this at 09:09 — 13th June 2008.
He has: 400 posts
Joined: May 2008
The Forum was working but i am making an upgrade soon so i have taken it down. There were a few issues but i shall be implementing alot of antispam measures before i re release it.
I am redoing all of the site soon and shall take everything into account...
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