I have done more practicing!

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Joined: Feb 2000

Thank you for all of you who have helped me on my way to becoming a webmaster. I am a long way off compared to most of you, but one day I will get there. I have updated my site again and would like some suggestions on improving it.

http://www.losarrieros.com

Jose Montes Jr.

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you mispelled compact disc as comact disc

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it's looking OK but you are using too many fonts families.
JP

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I agree...

1) Too many different fonts. Stick to two or three MAYBE.

2) You don't need a description of each section popping up for each mouse-over, 'cause they are pretty much self-explanitory.

3) The edges of all the graphics look jagged. Maybe anti-alias them?

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  • Megan's picture

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    I agree. The font you've used for the left navigation is too hard to read at that size.

    Always keep your text a little bit away from the edge of the page. You also need to put your navigation menu on every page. That's very important.

    DOn't link to pages that just say "Under Construction." Just take the link tag out from that one until the page is ready.

    It's interesting how you have played with the angles on the page, but I don't think it's really working. It's strange to see the blue part on the left disappear after the first page, and the top one doesn't quite extend in a straight line all the way too the top.

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    Too many fonts. I don't like the color. It looks jagedy. It takes a while to load.

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    hi,

    1) i agree about the fonts. They are also hard to read. Rollovers need some work.
    2)Get rid of the graphic or backgrond triangle you got there. It take way to mch time to load. Doesnt need to be there. Put something else there instead.
    3) Those can get you start on some changes. It looks like a lot better start then your other one. Your one your way!

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    Adam Lee
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