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Chew it up spit it out then flick it onto a cow. ?
http://playstuff.hypermart.net needs to be critiqued by you!
thank you very much and i hope you have a good day too.

I made kinda a poem at the end.

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~El Park~

Some people look at things that are and say, "why?" I look at things that never were and say, "why not?"

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Joined: Dec 1999

Well, here's what I think:

The design is pretty bad as far as navigation goes. I had trouble getting around the site.

The splash page seams like it has too much clutter, and it was hard to find out where to click. And on the left there is a list of what looks like links, but aren't. I would change those to links.

All the graphics on the page are fuzzy. And having that table centered makes the page look like it is in an entire world, and has it's own little section in the middle. It's hard to explained. It gives the feel that it isn't the main content. It seems to emphasize on the outter white edges. That may just be my oppinion.

Also, the poll looks out of place, but that may be what you want. It looks sort of "cool".

I liked the idea of the site though. You definitly have a few things to change and fix up, but all in all: Great Content.

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D'Angelo Web Design http://www.dangelowebdesign.com

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Joined: Jun 1999

I agree with Dangelo. Overall, it's just too cluttered. Right now I'm looking at the playstation home page. There are three totally different hues of blue here. It would be okay to use different shades of the same colour but not three totally different colours. I hope this makes sense. The browney-gray, red and yellow box on the right side doesn't really go with the blue and white on the rest of the page, but these three colours look good together - I would ditch the blue and go with something more like this (IMO blue is overused on the web)

What's with that table background with the little dots and bows? Totally doesn't suit the site.

You should have a site title or logo at the top of every page.

That left navigation bar thing doesn't look right at all - it looks like somebody was trying to make some sort of a 3D box in photoshop but didn't know what they were doing or hadn't had enough practice.

Oh Jeez - went to the "Dates" page - a 4th new layout. I like the idea of deviating from a standard template but some elements IMO should be the same on every page - it just doesn't feel right otherwise. This would be okay if the cheat menu on the right side looked more like the "tips for gamers" box on the previous page.

At 1024 the margins for each of the Playstation pages are diferent - weird.

Went to the dreamcast section - you really need to reduce the number of colours you've used. A lot of colours can be okay but only if they match!

Is that enough?

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