This is final (If you think it's good)
I need to ask you to look at my site for the third time. I now look at my site, not like: Hmm, seems good. But like: Hmm, that could be wrong. I made a final design. If it's not good, I'll just take some template from a site and put my content on it. site-32.com/new
taff posted this at 19:47 — 29th June 2001.
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many typos/spelling/grammatical errors in such a small block of text:
verry = very
writen = written
improve = improving
seconde = second
some thing = something
cause = because
and in my opinion:
website = web site (this one could be nitpicky and open to debate)
.....
Gyrbo posted this at 21:09 — 29th June 2001.
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Well hey, I just typed that text in 1 minute. It's basically just there to show how it looks like with some content. Just say what you think of the design?
KarenArt posted this at 22:16 — 29th June 2001.
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I like your redesign better!
I do think you only need one logo at the top [Site 32] or the ball logo, but not both.
Do realize that spelling and basic grammer IS a part of good website (yeah, I spell it that way) design!
If you are sloppy about that, then no one will notice all your other brilliant work.
You actually don't have that many words on your page, so it would only take a few seconds to run your text through a spell checker.
I'm terrible at spelling so I have three different people I always ask to check my pages, and I still have visitors who will point out errors that we haven't seen.
I think you're on the right track though. I'll be interested to see what you do with it.
gotta finish redesigning my sites so I can show them again.
The purpose of education is... to get more jokes!
citron posted this at 06:58 — 30th June 2001.
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Gyrbo,
I like the new logo at the top left - I don't like the old ball logo in the centre.
I suggest more space - for example around the navigation entries and at the end of the text.
You ask if the design is good. Well, it's OK if it's there as a resource for yourself and your existing customers, and it could also be fine if your scripts are sufficiently original and useful in themselves for you to get listed at other script portal sites. However I don't see it attracting any new business for website design.
Stephen
Office Users.
See the possibility.
Make the choice.
visualguide.com
Gyrbo posted this at 08:01 — 30th June 2001.
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Gee please, don't look at the ball logo. It's just a sample banner I placed there. Otherwise it would look too empty.
Thanks, I won't bother you with my website anymore. However, I will come back regualery to check for new posts.
The Webmistress posted this at 10:10 — 30th June 2001.
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Gyrbo, please don't get the hump with any comments made here. You asked what people thought of the design and that is what they are doing.
It is a lot better & fresher looking but I do agree with citron about being a general resource that "webmasters/mistresses" would find useful unless it offered something completely different and original.
Julia - if life was meant to be easy Michael Angelo would have painted the floor....
Jiffy posted this at 18:28 — 2nd July 2001.
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Hmm, I got nothing, nadda, zilch. I tried deleting the "new" bit at the end of the url to no avail.
I'll try later.
Gyrbo posted this at 19:01 — 2nd July 2001.
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Maybe my host was down, the site is finished: site-32.com
Jiffy posted this at 19:03 — 2nd July 2001.
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Working now, well one page is.
I like the colours a lot. It's nice clean and fresh looking. The next step is to develop some content for it. At the moment, it's really a page review. Hopefully next you'll be here for a website review!
Jiffy posted this at 19:11 — 2nd July 2001.
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Hey, that was quick! It looks quite promising.
There is quite a lot of typo's and spelling mistakes that are quite distracting. Try running it through a spell checker. Having said that, I'm sure your English is far better than my Belgian!
Nice work with the forum! You look a bit lonely in it though!
Basically, you need loads and loads of content and then start drumming up visitors to the site and hopefully it'll take off.
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