Critique time

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Please have a look at my site and tell me what you think.
It's quite graphic heavy I'm afraid and the HTML could do with tidying up.
Requires version 4 browsers or above, (preferably IE),
Uses a little bit of flash (can you find it?)
and a little bit of javascript.

...and don't believe everything you read....

http://www.haemavore.co.uk

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Wow....
Man...
Very Interesting Reading... Really Nice job on that aspect, this is some interesting stuff.. : )

Your design uses very good colors. the reds and blacks go well together on your site. Nice job here.

Past the splash page on your main page, the information is ordered very nicely. Simple and effective. With text links at the bottom, nice job.

Overall its a very good site, stating its nature as vampirism doesnt hurt the design aspect. Ahh, Simple, yet, Effective. : )

Ken Prescott

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The site has a good color scheme and good information. I am not, however, a fan of watermarks. But that's personal preference. I think that the navigation links should stand out more. Because you use the same picture as the background, they are more difficult to see. And the text on the buttons is hard to read. I might come up with navigation that looks different from the background.

Good job.

Brooke

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Watermarks? what watermarks?

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Watermark = non-scrolling (fixed) background, I think.

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Yup - that's what I mean - but just the opposite. The background stays still while the rest of the page scrolls over it!

Brooke

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a couple of typos on Who_am_I.htm - "agree it IS in the public's best interest" and "the truth about Vampires sTays secret" - I'm guessing you know about the display of store.htm on N4


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Whoops!
Ok spellcheck now done.

Apart from a couple of graphics gliches (what the hell's causing that?) there seems to be no problem with store.htm in Netscape 6.
I haven't got Netscape 4 so it hasn't been tested with that version.
What goes wrong? (Dare I ask?)

[Edited by haemavore on Feb. 18, 2001 at 05:54 PM]

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the alignments are messed up - I can't look right now and there's a good chance I won't be able to figure it out anyaway, but I will look tonight or tommorow


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