Critique needed...

They have: 65 posts

Joined: Dec 1999

Please critique my site by going to http://www.angelfire.com/ct2/jesse . I have not used images, but I am going to add a pic in the 'jesse engle' section. If you could make me a couple cool pics to go with the colors that'd be great. for now just critique.

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Well- I guess it's good for what you have so far. You need some graphics...

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Joined: May 1999

Jesse,

I am really impressed with what you have already. I like the fact that you are starting a site that seems to have some thought put into it instead of just putting up lots of animations, java, and stuff that you have taken from other sites.

Couple of comments.

1. You might think about increasing font size just a bit. Us old guys have a hard time reading really small fonts.

2. Don't forget nav bars on all the pages. You might think about using SSI for you navigation. Give me a holler if you need to know how to set it up.

3. Check your grammer. If you are wanting to do websites for companies that are run by old fogies that finished college they are going to look at grammer and spelling. Just a fact of life in the buisness world

4. Put some headings on top of the pages so people will know where they are.

Good start Keep us posted as to your progress. Also let us know when you get your first job. Don't forget to have someone help you with your buisness plan. Don't price yourself real cheap just because you are only 12.

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Yeah, I need some images, but I use my grandma's computer because it's REALLY FAST, but I don't have an Image Editor/Composer, Unless it were MS Paint, and they don't have good graphics changes and stuff, and when I use them on a site, they turn out to be blurry. NEED SOME HELP!!!

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I am going to put a navigational bar on every page except my portfolio, but I do not need SSI, because there are very few pages. I do not plan to add a heading unless it is image-wise. Like Justin said, I need some graphics, but I don't have an editor. Anyone who can make a few images for each heading, that'd be great. I am editing the text in frontpage now.

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He has: 150 posts

Joined: Apr 1999

JFEngle: You should try out Paintshop Pro if you're looking for an image editor. Photoshop is better, but PSP is a good shareware solution.

You're off to a good start. The color scheme is nice, but the page is a bit empty.

Keep up the good work!

[This message has been edited by Stefen Enns (edited 20 January 2000).]

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