Critique This Free Traffic Generating Tool: Billionblaster.com
My main hope was to make it so that anyone visiting would be able to understand in 10 seconds what it's about. I'm worried it might be perhaps a little too much text. What do you think?
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timjpriebe posted this at 14:39 — 19th January 2006.
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Looks pretty obvious to me.
robfenn posted this at 15:16 — 19th January 2006.
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Looks so dubious though! You say it has been mentioned in News Today etc. So where are the press cuttings?
demonhale posted this at 17:27 — 19th January 2006.
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looks a ok... targets and first impression leads me a sort of a niche site, with something to still prove...
Busy posted this at 22:00 — 19th January 2006.
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Firefox blocked a pop up.
That picture on left side, the one with the woman totally surprised, could it be a reaction from a wedgie? cause he looks pretty happy about himself
Your FAQ is interesting:
Sign up for advertising and possibly meet a woman atthe same time - bonus
I think the layout or probably just the colours look a little cheesy, I think you need to put the 'tips' above the form or people could just add anyone into the form (non site owners) also when the copyright name is different to the site name it often looks like it's an affiliate program.
Benjamin posted this at 00:18 — 20th January 2006.
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The people in the pictures look very cheezy. Why not be honest and say, " Our website promotion may not change your life, but if you are willing to try our service, hopefully you will find that it was a good choice."
aboyd posted this at 02:40 — 22nd January 2006.
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True.
That comes off like "hey, we're mediocre." The graphics could be less cheesy, true. But that doesn't mean he should have a lukewarm message. If he's excited about the site and wants to express it, he should. It may make others excited.
-Tony
timjpriebe posted this at 15:55 — 20th January 2006.
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As someone who has used stock images on a few sites (here, here and here), I know it's often hard to get just the right fit of what you're trying to get your site to convey with photos. Custom photos aren't easy, stock photos are much less so. So I think you did a decent job of using photos, even though they are slightly cheesy.
Tim
http://www.tandswebdesign.com
Benjamin posted this at 21:51 — 20th January 2006.
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Why try to make your service seem as though it will blow your costumers away and change their lives? Why not tell the truth?
timjpriebe posted this at 14:54 — 23rd January 2006.
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I have to agree with Tony. Anyone who actually thinks that this product will change their life, even after reading Sprint's site, has pretty much lost touch with reality. You need exciting copy to get people to use your product, even when it's free.
Tim
http://www.tandswebdesign.com
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