Critique This Free Traffic Generating Tool: Billionblaster.com

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My main hope was to make it so that anyone visiting would be able to understand in 10 seconds what it's about. I'm worried it might be perhaps a little too much text. What do you think?

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Looks pretty obvious to me.

robfenn's picture

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Looks so dubious though! You say it has been mentioned in News Today etc. So where are the press cuttings?

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looks a ok... targets and first impression leads me a sort of a niche site, with something to still prove...

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Firefox blocked a pop up.
That picture on left side, the one with the woman totally surprised, could it be a reaction from a wedgie? cause he looks pretty happy about himself Smiling

Your FAQ is interesting:

Quote: What kind of guarantee do you offer?
* When you become a member of the Affluent Romance Company we guarantee to find you a woman who goes beyond your highest expectations, in looks, education, intelligence, positive and friendly attitude, who enjoys the same types of activities you do, and much much more. Our money back guarantee is as follows: If after using our services for the life of your membership and you still have not found the woman of your dreams then we will provide full 100% unconditional refund with no questions or hard feeling on our part, no that's confidence!

Sign up for advertising and possibly meet a woman atthe same time - bonus Wink

I think the layout or probably just the colours look a little cheesy, I think you need to put the 'tips' above the form or people could just add anyone into the form (non site owners) also when the copyright name is different to the site name it often looks like it's an affiliate program.

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The people in the pictures look very cheezy. Why not be honest and say, " Our website promotion may not change your life, but if you are willing to try our service, hopefully you will find that it was a good choice."

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Benjamin wrote: The people in the pictures look very cheezy.

True.

Benjamin wrote: Why not be honest and say, " Our website promotion may not change your life, but if you are willing to try our service, hopefully you will find that it was a good choice."

That comes off like "hey, we're mediocre." The graphics could be less cheesy, true. But that doesn't mean he should have a lukewarm message. If he's excited about the site and wants to express it, he should. It may make others excited.

-Tony

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As someone who has used stock images on a few sites (here, here and here), I know it's often hard to get just the right fit of what you're trying to get your site to convey with photos. Custom photos aren't easy, stock photos are much less so. So I think you did a decent job of using photos, even though they are slightly cheesy.

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Why try to make your service seem as though it will blow your costumers away and change their lives? Why not tell the truth?

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I have to agree with Tony. Anyone who actually thinks that this product will change their life, even after reading Sprint's site, has pretty much lost touch with reality. You need exciting copy to get people to use your product, even when it's free.

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