Critique this! - The final version of my site.

They have: 5,633 posts

Joined: Jan 1970

Well I finally figured out the problem with my site, and have put up a working version. I looked at it both in IE and NS, and they looked exactly the same, so that good. Check it out and tell me what you think!

http://www.fireburn.com

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FireBurn Web Publishing - fireburn.com
[red]Low cost web design, graphic design, and more![/red]

They have: 141 posts

Joined: Aug 1999

I couldn't get the creditcards.gif to load. Also, when I refreshed that page, the cell baground didn't load.

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d-Lo Entertainment - The dark side of humor
http://dlo.net

They have: 36 posts

Joined: Jul 1999

Nice! I like the layout, nice and compact, everything is easy to see, simple but attractive layout.

Just outta curiousity: Is your company have employees, or do you work alone? and for all of your tables, menu, etc. did you have it all the same on each page, hardcoded, or did you use SSI? just curious... i've made a few pages with menus and all in graphic tables, but it's a bitch to do something like add a button.

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Dan Tucker
http://ctpball.paintballresource.com

They have: 2,390 posts

Joined: Nov 1998

Plz change the font you use to Verdana or something Smiling
JP

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[red]The Next Step in Website Development [/red] - http://www.what-next.com
The Webmaster Promotion and Resource Center

They have: 42 posts

Joined: Apr 1999

Hi there. Smiling

Three quick suggestions:
- Have you tried using an image map instead of all the images broken up? Doesn't seem like you're doing some mouseover thing.
- ... could be replaced with a stretched 1x1 transparent .gif or something similar, that way there won't be the small break in the right hand side's border.
- Give your table a background color, that way people who still haven't had the image load up don't have to try reading black text on a red & black striped backdrop.
- Your capitalization in the last couple sentences should just be normal.

Good luck with your business (:

They have: 5,633 posts

Joined: Jan 1970

Thanks everyone! Sorry I havn't replied earlier, but I was away the past few days. Currently I'm the only employee. I am aware of the creditcards.gif image problem. The tables arn't easy, and gave me alot of problems, but it was worth it. Please keep the comments coming!

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FireBurn Web Publishing - fireburn.com
[red]Low cost web design, graphic design, and more![/red]

They have: 112 posts

Joined: Apr 1999

Hi,
I think the text are a little bit to hard to read. In addition to that the background is too bright, my eyes are not feeling comfortable with the color, maybe you could try a darker red instead.
Just my 2 cents.
Later

They have: 296 posts

Joined: Sep 1999

Ok I am sorry but I am going to have to comment on that that hardcore red background there. Do remember that Webtv users have contrast problems viewing red and black. I think that the menu on the left should have a bigger font. It was a bit hard to read especially after being dazzled with the red background.
~Vy~

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