check it again

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hi,

could you check my website again? http://frdesigns.cjb.net

thank you,
fabian

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It's OK, but there is a lot of white space... Fix that up, and you've got yourself a nice site.

Brian

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Nice.

1) I see no need to have the splash entry page. It's just an extra click for the user.

2) You need to add another color besides just white, green, and black. I would add another "hot" color like bright orange or blue or something like that.

3) Pre-load the image flips.

4) Add some dividers to the page which divide: a) the menu from the content area, and b) the content area from the news part.

5) I also see no need to have pop-ups, but if you like them then I guess they're fine.

You could also create an english version...

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thank you

1) yeah, that's right. but i use the splash page to present all the buttons.

2)i made it and it looks better. thanx for the tip

3)i use dreamweaver and pre-load the image-flips

4)i will see

5)okay

i would make an english version. but my english is too bad

thank you for your critique

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