bandpage

merlin's picture

They have: 410 posts

Joined: Oct 1999

i'd appreciate any feedback to the following site:
http://www.greenbreak.ch/htbin/show.pl

it's an official bandpage. text is in german, but will be in english too, in final version. the navbuttons are not yet finished, there will be a mouseover effect (there is an example).

well, thank you for your comments

They have: 429 posts

Joined: Jul 2000

It looks bland.

Really, I think it needs to be more developed in design. I didn't get the feel for what the band was about.

I don't speak/read german, but it looks like you have a lot of content, and you should have your content and design rub elbows when it comes to being plentiful and good.

And.. it scrolls horizontally.

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Justin S's picture

They have: 2,076 posts

Joined: Jun 1999

1) You need a logo on the page. And it needs to stand out.

2) Why are all the menu items the same? Anyway, I think the menu has to fit all on one line so you may have to shrink the images.

3) The main content area is screwed up. Why does it say...

Quote:
greenbreaks...[table start]...erster Tag[table middle]4. April 1998[table endofline]
[table startofline]...erster Song[table middle]Ketchup[table endofline]
[table startofline]...erstes Konzert auf einer richtigen Bühne[table middle]Open Air Gränichen, 21. August 1999[table endofline]
[table startofline]...erste CD[table middle]"go for...", erscheint im Oktober 2000[table end]

That's weird. Also, the page does scroll on my 800x600 resolution monitor. You need to make your table 760 pixels wide so it won't scroll. Finally, on the top right side of the table it's supposed to curve in, not out.

4) The color scheme needs some work. I can go for the purple background and the green logo (that you're using for the menu), but that teal color just isn't helping much. I'd change that color.

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