all comments please!!

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i havent finished my new site yet and its going to be a few weeks before it is done so i had to put this page up in the meantime. the aim of this is to get people to leave their address, please leave your comments

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They have: 5,633 posts

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i could really use the help if possible!!!

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Click Here For Webmasters Only Site!!
[email protected]

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Justin S's picture

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All the graphicd are really fuzzy. In my opinion, it wouldn't convince me to leave my e-mail address...

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Looks OK at the moment, and loads quickly. You might want to change the image at the top (Join) to a text link so it loads faster and isn't so fuzzy. ~Tim

Brooke's picture

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I think it's a bit dark. It really doesn't grab my attention. Although I do think the layout and design is nice.

If you are trying to get people to leave their email addresses - try to make the text short and to the point. Really grab their attention so that they will want to leave it.

Brooke

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www.cataluna.com

They have: 359 posts

Joined: Mar 1999

Check your spelling and the grammatical content. Doesn't inspire a lot of trust in your site when there are several spelling errors. Think your in Japan and if English isn't your native language, get somebody else to write it for you if needed.

Logo looks alot like one JP used to use here on TWF?

Dan

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Brooke's picture

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I don't know...there is just something about it. I don't feel like I am at a main page - kind of a misc page in the site somewhere.

Also, I do like the logo (the webmasters-only title bar) but for some reason it feels like a banner ad on this page. That might be a turnoff for the look of the page.

But I like how the colors are brighter. It's much more eye catching!

Brooke

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Providing quality websites for businesses and individuals!
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Joined: Jan 2000

Yes, the fuzzy logo at the top isn't so nice.

Also, I'm a boxy person myself, but I like boxes & tables to line up at the sides.
I'm not so sure all those tables are really necessary, they're somewhat distracting...

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