Terms of Service - Initial Draft

Hey guys, I've been working on a TOS page for ColdCast, and before it goes live, I would like someone with experience in legal documents to take a peak and let me know if it is sufficient for a Social Network/Social Media Sharing site.

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Please let me know if I'm missing something, or if something needs changing.

I will really appreciate any help on this

Thanks.