Welcome to TWF, Moogle! You've got a good start going on this design! I find it interesting that you've started with a very boxy layout but mutated it in a way that it doesn't look boxy at all. A lot of people could learn from this. I like the dashed borders and the way that graphic curls over the bottom bar. what happens on longer pages when that bar gets pushed down further? That's an interesting concept to have a bigger graphic navigation at the bottom of the page like that. One problem I have is that a lot of the text is a little too small to read comfortably, especially the horizontal navigation. You could have that stretch all the way across and make the font a tad bit bigger. This partially depends on your target audience though.
I think the bottom corner will get sorted out when you have some real ads to put there.
Very nice! I would take out the logo on the bottom left corner though. It's not really necessary considering you have a logo on the top. I like how you have it laid out, very nice.
Wow, that looks really nice, but I don't think I like that white background. Maybe you could make it that sivler-blue color you used that the top of the page behind the words fran studios. I also think that making the colors of the boxes change (I'd personally have them get a little lighter shade) when your mose goes over them.
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icerider posted this at 23:53 — 22nd March 2004.
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Looks pretty good, but the bottom right corner looks real messy. I would take away the logo from that corner.
Anonymous posted this at 01:41 — 23rd March 2004.
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I agree the lower corner looks messy.
The colors look nice.
Maybe take out the text in that corner and put it some where else.
Megan posted this at 14:19 — 23rd March 2004.
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Welcome to TWF, Moogle! You've got a good start going on this design! I find it interesting that you've started with a very boxy layout but mutated it in a way that it doesn't look boxy at all. A lot of people could learn from this. I like the dashed borders and the way that graphic curls over the bottom bar. what happens on longer pages when that bar gets pushed down further? That's an interesting concept to have a bigger graphic navigation at the bottom of the page like that. One problem I have is that a lot of the text is a little too small to read comfortably, especially the horizontal navigation. You could have that stretch all the way across and make the font a tad bit bigger. This partially depends on your target audience though.
I think the bottom corner will get sorted out when you have some real ads to put there.
Megan
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webmastery posted this at 16:26 — 24th March 2004.
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Nice work Moogle!
DC_Sara posted this at 19:55 — 24th March 2004.
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Very nice! I would take out the logo on the bottom left corner though. It's not really necessary considering you have a logo on the top.
I like how you have it laid out, very nice.
~*Sara*~
Old Socks posted this at 22:53 — 25th March 2004.
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The bottom corner is a lil too much like has been mentioned. But other than that - a great design with a lot of potential!
tomaine2002 posted this at 13:17 — 3rd April 2004.
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Wow, that looks really nice, but I don't think I like that white background. Maybe you could make it that sivler-blue color you used that the top of the page behind the words fran studios. I also think that making the colors of the boxes change (I'd personally have them get a little lighter shade) when your mose goes over them.
BIGMONAY posted this at 18:24 — 7th April 2004.
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that's really nice...
Ja99iE posted this at 18:12 — 10th April 2004.
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Love the design!
What do you call the font on the nav bar at the top? I think it'd be perfect for a site im working on for college.
Thanks
Ja99iE
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