harsh is OK

They have: 10 posts

Joined: Jul 2004

Hi;
I am new to web publishing and thought maybe you guys could help by stopping me now in any bad directions. Be harsh it is ok. I have put up my first mockup (still in concept stage).
musicians-classified.com
This is just a fireworks png, I do plan to build in in dreamweaver optimizing my graphics. This was just to see how bad the graphics looked.
Thanks in Advance

Abhishek Reddy's picture

He has: 3,348 posts

Joined: Jul 2001

Moved to Concept, Layout and Graphics Design. Smiling

The nav and text content don't do it for me. Nav looks overdone, with the gradients and shadows. Maybe simplify it a little? I suppose I can't complain much about the text formatting at this stage.

The rest looks fine to me. Smiling

They have: 10 posts

Joined: Jul 2004

No that's good, I was kind of thinking that I didn't like the actual nav bar itself. The text is just there, I'm not sure how I want to do it. I can't seem to figure out the actual ad's code so I don't know how to lay it out. I thought the whole banner was cheesy. Thanks

Megan's picture

She has: 11,421 posts

Joined: Jun 1999

All I'm gettig is a directory tree with no html pages.

They have: 10 posts

Joined: Jul 2004

It's been pulled, Another one uploaded. You caught me inbetween. No one uses the site and search engines do not recognize it yet so it felt safe to leave tree for a few hours. Thanks for even taking a look. I am such a begginer and as you can tell not a graphic artist.
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